The next chapter is well on it's way I promise but before I can post it I have a few quick things to say! First this story is reciving a title change it will soon be going by "Jay Bird" as "a Bit of Everything" is really vague and doesn't relate to much to the story and could initially be miss interpreted as a book of one shots. Next I just have some questions to ask regarding the story to help me improve and focus more one what you want to see! So if you can answer them that'd be a huge help!
1. Are you able to tell how Natsu died? If so is it obvious or are you simply able to infer what happened based on what I've given you?
2. Would you prefer to know how he died/what actually occured or would it be better left hidden and up to interpretation?
3. Are you able to tell when Natsu is lying to his guild mates?
4. Do the angels all feel like they have a unique personality?
5. Do any of the angels conjure a sense of distrust?
6. Would you prefer more or less angels in the story?
7. Would you prefer for Fairy Tail to be more involved or less?
8. Which angel is your favourite?
9. Which angel is your least favourite?
10. Does the new information given throughout the story feel natural to you or does it feel like you are being spoon fed?
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Jay Bird (aBoE)
FanfictionBorn human, died and brought back to life as a demon. Lived as a demon, died and brought back to life as an angel. Natsu Dragneel has truly been it all. His new found existence as an angel as caused some changes in his life, he's lost his insatiable...
