Title: An Elixir of Zemblanity
Author: swastiana
Genre: Horror
Review by: @mumal16
Cover:
The cover seems nice, but the font isn't good enough. To be honest, I wouldn't have been attracted to the book by this cover. People say, don't judge a book by its cover. BUT cover is the most important thing to attract your readers. That is the first thing which makes the reader look at YOUR book out of the others. So work on the cover, it's font especially. The font style and colour of it needs to be worked on. Try to make a HD quality cover. Since it's a horror book, something creepy, scary yet elegant and simple so it doesn't look too overcrowded or something.
Blurb:
This is amazing! I loved the blurb, it's very mysterious and attractive. Definitely would make people read it.
Plot:
Alright, to be honest, I got very nervous when I saw that it was a horror book because I never read or watch horror things. NEVER. But I saw that you had completed the payment, so I encouraged myself to try out a horror book for the first time for your sake.
Hold up, I just need to ask.
WHY DID YOU EVEN ASK ME FOR A REVIEW YOUR BOOK IS PERFECT! I couldn't find anything to pinpoint!
As a thirteen-year-old, you're doing wonders, oh my god! It puts me to shame. You're such an amazing writer it feels like you were born for this.
The vocabulary, the writing style, the imagery, the grammar, everything is amazing and to the point!
I was in awe as I read the perfectly written preface. The story was so unique and incredible that it made me squeal as I fangirled over your writing. And I seriously have no idea what to correct in it. Such a remarkable job!
I love how you start your chapters with beautiful quotes. It peeks up the interest of the reader, surely did mine. Good job there as well!
I want to ask you again, are you really a thirteen year old? The way you have described the things, creates perfect imagery in my mind. It seems like I'm watching a movie and not reading a book and this is what makes a book perfect.
I'm not even sure how to make this review long as I couldn't find one single flaw in the book. Hats off to you and I have to say, you should teach me your skills.
The descriptions you gave of the surroundings, people, their emotions, everything was easily created in my mind and I could imagine myself being present there (which I hope so, I don't ever get there).
This book should be published as a hard copy and available in all the bookstores. I'd advice you to contact some publishers on wattpad once you're done writing the book.
I could feel goosebumps on me the whole time I was reading the book and surprisingly it's just the start. Thanks to you I'm officially scared now, so you did a great job haunting me and the others.
Keep writing like this, I hope you achieve what you want for this book because it has the potential to.
YOU ARE READING
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