🍀 THE DREAM CATCHER AND THE CONJURER'S CHARM 🍀

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AUTHOR: Heuristic_Hashmath

Hey, guys! This book just won first place under SCIENCE FICTION! Check this book out!

Comment by the judge (xvpizzalov): The cover and the title correlated well with the story, the vibe, atmosphere and first impression emitted from the cover also went well

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Comment by the judge (xvpizzalov): The cover and the title correlated well with the story, the vibe, atmosphere and first impression emitted from the cover also went well. Though the blurb, apparently said too much about the story surpassing its purpose as to just give a brief summary. The blurb written was better made as a prologue rather than a synopsis,given too much information, and the way it was written.

Writing style of the author was good. It wasn't too excessive on the play of words, nor too boring. Though it lacked emotion at times, not emphasizing the intensity or what emotion it needed to relay to the readers. This goes with paragraph divisions and breaks. I'm not saying it needs excessive commas or periods, it just literally needs paragraph divisions. Maybe also improve in imagery for better mood emission. 

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