🍀 GWENETH 🍀

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AUTHOR: majolaade

Hey guys! This book just won FIRST place under GENERAL FICTION BATCH ONE! You all should go check this book out :)

Hey guys! This book just won FIRST place under GENERAL FICTION BATCH ONE! You all should go check this book out :)

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COMMENT FROM THE JUDGE (xvpizzalov):

The cover seemed to have a basic problem with the text, the color needs to contrast, and the font needs to fit well with the plot of the story as well. Also, it kinda felt a little empty or dull in terms of the vibe emitted, which kinda affects the first impression given to the readers. The writing style of the story was a little simple, but for some reason, it didn't bother me, given the author was writing based on a little girl's perspective. Stil,l maybe add a few improvements in terms of imagery and descriptive narration. The plot had a good flow, it wasn't too fast nor too slow. 

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