how would you guys like a remake of this story with better writing and an actual storyline that isn't all over the place?
i would write it like this:
you walked back to your dorm room...
and i'll probably have a couple of OC's too :)
mistakes i made in the book:
- your birthday was the same as jane's but not ben's which is totally wrong since ben was your twin
- i just generally hate it lol
- also the two OC's i made, micheala and sadie, were my ibfs but then we fell out and started bitching about me and sided with my ex gf who told me to k*ll myself so they won't be in this story obviously
- i'm also going to remove alice and daisy from this story only because idk how i would write them in
that's it! would you guys like to see it?
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Space Between
FantasyMal cannot handle all the pressure of becoming a 'Lady Of The Court' so she goes back home. To the Isle Of The Lost. The VK's, Ben and (Y/N) set out to find her. What happened when the twins get captured by Uma and her pirates? How will the VK's get...
