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Judge: VRMY13

Participant: 2MysteriousGem

Place: Asia

Book: ~POEMS~

Grammar: 20/30

There were several grammar mistakes that I found.

Emotions: 8/10

I can feel that you write by emotion, but it kind of lacks impact.

Line Structure: 9/10

Some are not written in stanzas, but it's good.

Poetic Devices: 15/20

I don't really notice that you use other poetic devices aside from rhymes.

Organization & Diction: 28/30

Well organized.

Total: 80/100

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Participant: more-like-reyna

Place: India, Asia

Book: Reflection

Grammar: 28/30

Emotions: 10/10

Each word spoken held depth one wouldn't help but feel

Line Structure: 10/10

Set in simple sentences to read but feel

Poetic Devices: 19/20

A huge role of similes, metaphors and rhymes played throughout each poem

Organization&diction: 26/30

Well structured, some could do with a bit more or less

Total: 94/100

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Participant: NerissaTheodora

Place: Asia

Book: Hidden Facets of a Gal

Grammar: 27/30

Some words can be omitted to give a deeper meaning

Emotions: 10/10

The emotions oozing through each line spoken, written, said, one can feel even if there is no similar event that has happened to one to feel

Line Structure: 10/10

Each stanza is written and held with a kick to emotions

Poetic Devices: 19/20

Metaphors, similes, rhymes all play a huge role within the texts that formed the stories being told

Organization&diction: 27/30

Organized and spoken/written well

Total: 93/100

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