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Judge: pinkiriss
Participant: booklored
Book: Sugar Baby
Is the story able to bring out emotion in you?
58/60
Does the story have a relevant title?
10/10
Is the cover relevant? Does it bring out emotion too?
30/30
Total: 98/100
The story is a complete package..... flawless grammar, flowing sentences, beautiful cover, yadda yadda. The plot is so unique never-seen-before! It really intrigues me and I would definitely read on. The sentences are beautifully crafted the vocabulary is rich. The interactions between the characters, especially the main boys, are extremely tense and well-done. The author writes about human emotion and desire nicely. I was definitely able to connect with Xavier and have insight on his emotions. The pacing is excellent too.... the first three chapters sets up the conflict and dives right into action. Again, flawless - perfect twist of humor and lust❤️
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Participant: tamarind_me
Place: Asia
Book: Imperfect
Is the story able to bring out emotion in you?
52/60
Does the story have a relevant title?
10/10
Is the cover relevant? Does it bring out emotion too?
28/30
Total: 90/100
First of all, the title is very nicely chosen - it carries a deep meaning and I'm curious as to how it will play out in the story. The cover can use a little bit of improvement, but it definitely brings out emotion in the reader... it's very intimate and beautiful. The way that Saanjh and Abir describe and feel for each other is wonderfully written! Considering that this is judged based on the first few chapters, so far, there aren't a lot of emotional scenes. However, the connection between the characters is very romantic, strong, and stirs emotion inside the reader. I would definitely recommend this book❤️
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Participant: black-cypher
Place: America
Book: The President's Daughter
Is the story able to bring out emotion in you?
57/60
Does the story have a relevant title?
10/10
Is the cover relevant? Does it bring out emotion too?
29/30
Total: 96/100
This story is unique in a way that we get to see insights of two opposite spectrums: a president's daughter and an ex-convict. The struggles of both sides are described: the Secret Service and the articles for Hope, and the struggles of being abandoned by Damien. There aren't a lot of emotional scenes in the beginning chapters, but since the author noted that chapter 10 was the place to start, I took a look. That chapter carries a lot of emotional trauma and regret, and is wonderfully written. Altogether, this story creates a wonderful emotional effect and the pain that the two characters go through will definitely touch the reader❤️
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