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Judge: Akankshaola
Participant: FeministWitch_13
Place: Asia
Book: The Other World
Title: 8/10
Opening :8/10
Character: 17/20
Plot: 35/40
Grammar: 16/20
Total: 84/100
Title, opening, plot and character: The title could have been a bit more relavent and the opening is a bit rocky considering the plot. The character are introduced in a proper flow with the story but the vocabulary need to be more diverse.
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Participant: black-cypher
Place: America
Book: The President's Daughter
Title: 10/10
Opening: 10/10
Character: 19/20
Plot: 37/40
Grammar: 20/20
Total: 96/100
Opening and title: The opening is well defined and establish a strong foundation for the story to continue. The title is perfect for the story regarding the female protagonist.
Character and plot: The plot could have been a bit unique rather than a bit common one. The character could have had different personalities to match their roles perfectly.
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Participant: DeBigLila
Place: Africa
Book: Kwami
Title: 10/10
Opening: 10/10
Character: 20/20
Plot: 40/40
Grammar: 20/20
Total: 100/100
Character and opening: The characters are introduced with flow of the story and are perfectly interwoven giving a beautiful start with the finest vocabulary with use of diverse words.
Plot and title: It has a unique plot and the title represent the female protagonist which does justice with the story.
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Participant: theintrospectiveme
Book: He Came Back
Title: 10/10
Opening: 10/10
Character: 18/20
Plot: 38/40
Grammar: 20/20
Total: 96/100
Title and opening: The title justifies the story and the feelings of the character along with a perfect opening which creates mystery.
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