Poetry

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Judge: maifaye0025

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Judge: maifaye0025

Third Place
TrinityStellaParker
(L'anima Poesia)

First Impression [25/30] pts.
Title [9/10]
Book Cover [8.5/10]
Description [7.5/10]

Structure [46/50] pts.
Grammar/Spelling [9/10]
Creativity[14.5/15]
Message/Content [9/10]
Writing Style [14/15]

Overall Impact [19/20]

Total of [90.5/100]

The title and cover were nice and neat, but the description could have been better. I was hoping to see a flare of your creativity and charm to invite the reader to read your book. Nonetheless, your creativity side sparks the moment I read the first page. You have a brilliant way of telling a story using your poems but keep the corresponding lines close to the same length, that way, each verse will be similar in shape to the rest. Don't forget to put punctuation in the lines if needed and if you wanted to put random facts, lean it towards the theme so that it will have more impact. Overall, very fascinating, easy to read, and unique. Your words and verses indeed sound like a ballad. It has a deep connection and a good flow until the end.

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Second Place
Ananyaspeaks
(Esoteric)

First Impression [26.5/30] pts.
Title [9/10]
Book Cover [8/10.]
Description [9.5/10]

Structure [46/50] pts.
Grammar/Spelling [9/10]
Creativity [14/15.]
Message/Content [9/10]
Writing Style [14/15]

Overall Impact [18.5/20]

Total of [91/100]

The cover was not the best, but the title was fascinating and the description was seducing. The way you write gives off a different kind of ambiance and feels like you're taking your readers on a journey of discovery. You have a very creative mind and a deep understanding of your words that it resulted in a powerful and meaningful piece of art. In the future, experiment more on how to break words in verses just like your third poem to create more impact and emphasis on certain words, as well as double-check your verses for punctuation and word choices that can disrupt the flow of your poem. Overall, it was a great poem with a deep emotional connection.

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First Place
Amaboo
(Scar of Armor)

First Impression [26.5/30] pts.
Title [9/10]
Book Cover [9/10]
Description [8.5/10]

Structure [46/50] pts.
Grammar/Spelling [9/10.]
Creativity [14/15.]
Message/Content [9/10.]
Writing Style [14/15.]

Overall Impact [19/20.]

Total of [91.5/100]

The title and description were captivating, but the font for the cover needs to be bigger and readable. The way you incorporate songs into your poem helps create the atmosphere and make it more emotional. It was also unique and creative. You have a clear and deep understanding of your theme that made every symbolism and verses powerful. In the future, maybe add a few punctuations in some verses to indicate pauses and tone of voice. Overall, the depth of your words is like being pulled in a deep ocean. It was empowering and beautifully done.

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