Fantasy

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by charmclique

by charmclique

Judge: maifaye0025

Third Place
Debasmita02mitra
(The Dark of The Light)

First Impression [25.7/30] pts.
Title [8.5/10]
Book Cover [8.3/10]
Description [8.9/10]

Structure [44.9/50] pts.
Grammar/Spelling [8.8/10]
Character Design/Development [3.8/5]
Plot/Content [14/15]
Originality [4.3/5]
Writing Style [14/15]

Overall Impact [19/20]

Total of [89.6/100]

The title and description were good, but the cover was a bit bland. There were also visible grammar errors, mainly the use of pronouns and punctuation, and lengthy paragraphs that made the story a bit tedious. However, the narration was brilliant, and the characters were admirable. The world-building, the society, and the environment were also well developed that it made reading enjoyable and exciting. You have a profound description and a great introduction that catches the eye of the readers and helps with the visualization. Overall, great storytelling.

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Second Place
SamanthaLinares3
(The Unseelie Court)

First Impression [26.5/30] pts.
Title [8.8/10]
Book Cover [8.7/10]
Description [9/10]

Structure [44.7/50] pts.
Grammar/Spelling [8.9/10]
Character Design/Development [3.8/5]
Plot/Content [14.2/15]
Originality [3.8/5]
Writing Style [14/15]

Overall Impact [19/20]

Total of [90.2/100]

The title and the cover were simple, but the description was captivating. Your story has a great concept. The way you play with descriptive words helps set the mood and create a vivid image in the reader's mind. You have a great way of building a different kind of world and making the characters intriguing. The first few chapters itself, says a lot about the setting and how the society. However, double-check your punctuations and sentence structure, as they sometimes disrupt the flow of the story and change the tone. Overall, the story was fascinating. It stayed away from the cliche, and it already created a strong impression in just a few chapters. Well done.

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First Place
saige_1209
[The Chase(The Hybrid Chronicles#1)]

First Impression [26.3/30] pts.
Title [8.6/10]
Book Cover [8.7/10]
Description [9/10]

Structure [45.3/50] pts.
Grammar/Spelling [9/10]
Character Design/Development [4/5]
Plot/Content [14.3/15]
Originality [4/5]
Writing Style [14/15]

Overall Impact [19.4/20]

Total of [91/100]

The title and the cover were simple, but it gives off eerie vibes, and the description made it more interesting. The setting and atmosphere were on point and consistent throughout the story. You have a great way of using descriptive words that it throws the readers into an enchanting and mysterious world. The way your story revolves was also as fascinating as it keeps the readers at the edge of their seats, waiting for what would happen next. However, there were few grammatical errors, misplaced punctuations, and weak word structures that disrupt the flow of the story, but overall, it was wonderfully done.

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