Romance

112 10 3

by charmclique

by charmclique

Judge: cereal_ligaya endlessdaydream-

Third Place
trippshwty
(My Dark Secret)
First Impression [27/30] pts.
Title [10/10]
Book Cover [9/10]
Description [8/10]

Structure [48.5/50] pts.
Grammar/Spelling [10/10]
Character Design/Development [5/5]
Plot/Content [14.5/15]
Originality [4/5]
Writing Style [15/15]

Overall Impact [19.5/20]

Total of [95/100]

The cover looked really cute even though it's simple. I liked the story plot, it's totally not common and a good source of lesson. I just think that you should add the synopsis on the description so it can hook more readers.

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Second Place
love_tom1
(My Healer)

Default (F.I. 30%)
Title (10%) 10
Book cover (10%) 10
Description (10%) 10

Structure (50%)
Grammar/spelling [9/10]
Character Design/ Dev. [5/5]
Plot [13.5/15]
Originality [5/5]
Writing Style [14/15]

Overall impact [19/20]

Total: 95.5

Comment'

Your title is good and book cover is eye catching and obviously it's romance genre.
Your blurb is very interesting. Are you a foreigner? I will praise you because you're good at writing. Your words is powerful that anyone can catching their attention. Just be careful on your spacing♥ Continue your writing ♥

Notes: I'm not perfect, basic English I've known and only Tagalog language can I fix. Take this as your guide to improve your writings. ♥ You can DM me for your feedback about my judging. Thank you for considering me as your judge. ♥

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First Place
Bjishi
(If You'll Stay)

Score

First Impression [30/30]
Title [10/10]
Book cover [10/10]
Description [10/10]

Structure (46/50]
Grammar/spelling [9/10]
Character Design/ Dev. [5/5]
Plot [14/15]
Originality [5/5]
Writing Style [14/15]

Overall impact [19/20]

Total: 96

Comment

You have a potential on writing! Lalo na sa Tagalog. I like your cover, it's eye catching and also your description pati puso ko nakuha mo. Haha! Nailabas mo yung damdamin na gusto ko with a word 'stay'. Naastigan ako kay Luna. Haha. I suggest na huwag ka gumamit ng ganto '?!' Just express it on your word na sumisigaw siya and be careful with your spelling 🙂 continue what you're doing ♥

Notes: I'm not perfect and basic English lang alam ko at more on Tagalog kaya kong ayusin. Take this as your guide to improve your writings. ♥ You can DM me for your feedback about my judging. Thank you for considering me as your judge. ♥

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