rewrite our love (rewrite completed)

part one cuz why not

Snow drifted down gently around me,my feet hit the ground at steady pace,my breath came out in clouds as I hurried back home,desperate for some warmth.My name is Malaysia,or Mal for short I just turned 23 a few weeks back.I can't wait to get back to South-east Asia,it never snowed there,and i was surrounded by people who cared about me,however,in europe,it was always cold and lonely,with the weather always at freezing temperatures.My footsteps slowed as i stopped at a traffic light,my feet cracking the thin ice already forming.I looked up,hoping that the traffic light could hurry up and send me on my way home."Ding!"Rang my phone in a high soprano,it was a message from the Malphilindo group chat."Hey Mal!check out this cool mango drink i bought in Hawaii!How are you?I heard it's really cold in the Netherlands now,don't worry!i'll make you some mango smoothie when you get back ok?"A thin smile started to form on my face as i huffed out a laugh,it was my sister Philippines,she was always the sweetest person in our trio,with an uncontrollable addiction for mangoes and a huge crush on Russia.I sighed,looking up to check if the traffic light had turned green.
Then,I saw him.Red on the top,white below,just like my big sister's Indonesia's flag,but with a crescent and five stars right beside it.My eyes widened as i sucked in a gasp,no...no...NO i couldn't be him,isn't he in Asia now?Trying to develop a vaccine for the coronavirus pandemic?Yet here he is,eyes fixed on his phone as the strolled across the road,heading towards me.I took a step back,head frantically swinging from side to side,trying to find an escape route.Cold sweat dripping down my forehead.No! I wasn't ready to meet him! Not after what had happened all those years ago.Heck!I even came to Europe especially to avoid him.I turned around clumsily,my panic making my movements slow,just as I was about to slip into a dark alleyway,the screech of a car stopped me,I whipped around,fearing for the worse.My eyes widened as I saw the scene in front of me,a red car was speeding towards the country,with the driver of the car trying aimlessly to stop the car.The country stood in the middle of the road,face bunched up in fear,he let go of his phone,letting it fall onto the ground with a crack as the stood,frozen in the middle of the road,right in the path of the car.Then,everything seemed to happen in in slow-motion.I screamed out his name as i launched myself at him with the force of an elephant,pushing him out of the way,"no,not him,no"was all i could think of as i pushed the country out of the way,knocking the breath out of both of us as i took the full force of the car,it was painless for about a second,feeling nothing but the cobblestone road underneath me.When the pain kicked in,it wreaked me,it felt as if every bone in me was broken as i curled up on the road,wanting to just escape it all.My breath came out in pained gasps as tears came gushing out of my eyes,for a moment,the world felt like it lit on fire,taking everyone including me with it.The darkness came swiftly,as i welcomed it with open hands,falling into peaceful oblivion.

Singa's pov

As i fell onto the ground,my breath was knocked out of me.For a split second,i lay stunned on the ground,my mind a jumble of thoughts,what happened?Who pushed me?wasn't the car about to hit me?Maybe I was already dead."Crack!"A wet crunch snapped me back to reality,I was on high alert as i whipped my head to the sound.What was that?I thought,nothing else could have made that sound unless...numbness took me over as i lost my train of thoughts,I saw the car which was about to hit me speed away.A hit and run,however,i did not feel the least bit annoyed as i eyes fell on a limp figure on the ground,slender,with long hair reaching to her waist,hair which was now soaked in thick blood.Her flag was red,with white stripes and a blue box at the right corner,a little bit like America's flag.

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