The ear-splitting screech of metal on metal and shattering
glass ricocheted through the dark room, only illuminated by a
narrow stream of silvery moonlight pouring in from the
dingy, broken window. I waited.
One...two...three...utter silence. Four...five... six...I heard an
owl's hoot cut through the silence.
Seven...eight...nine...silence again. Ten. I heard a distant wail.
I heard a piercing scream. Then there was a smell. It was a
pungent odour, slowly drifting into the attic I was trapped in.
One that was engraved in my nightmares, from that dreadful
night a few years ago. The night my foster family was
murdered.
The suffocating stench clouded my mind as I heard screaming
and felt horror, unbearable pain. All the terrible foulness
collected in my mind like smoke in an air filter. I plugged my
nostrils with my fingers. I opened my glassy brown eyes and
shuddered.
In the corner of the attic I could make out the outline of a
few board games, a couple of albums that must have been
older than me and old teddy bears- some headless while
others limbless- lining the splintered wooden floor. It looked
exactly like my first home before my new family was taken
away. That was before I was accused of their murder. It was
long before when I didn't have to seek shelter in abandoned
attics.
A loud bang dragged me out of my train of thought and I
snapped. I rocked back and forth, flinging albums at the
mirror stuck to a cracked grey wall, splintering it into a
fractured starburst. I was trapped. The house wasn't
abandoned. I couldn't get out.
It took what felt like hours for my mind to right itself, trying
to quit roving crazily over the swirling, sickening landscape of
strange sounds and strange smells. Then I peered out the
window to see what I was up against, but not even the
desperation to escape this house , which reopened so many
old wounds prepared me for what lurked outside.
It was a black car. It was a black Aventador SV. It was the
same car that was at our house on the night of the murder.
Suddenly everything became clear. The black car and the
stench, everything added up. I was in the house of a
murderer.
I heard footsteps. They were growing louder and clearer by
the second. Someone was approaching the attic. This time I
wasn't scared. I was going to avenge my family's death.
I spun around, facing the door to the attic as it opened. a
A pair of icy blue eyes stared at me.
Those were the same unforgettable pair of eyes that I saw a
few years ago.
"What are you doing here?" the man croaked.
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IGCSE 1ST LANGUAGE
General FictionWhen I did my IGCSE's I found looking at examples helped me a lot so these are a bunch of stories, descriptives letters etc. that I wrote and got me an A. I don't know if these will get you an A or A* but this is basically for the new syllabus that'...