This is the only one with final results since this is just One-Shot. So, winner in this round will be on Top 8.
Still, congratulations to all of the participants! Have a room for improvements, writers!
JUDGED by lunahaeyo
Miss__moon07 ● All of the Stars ●
TITLE: 4/5
BOOK COVER: 5/5
BLURB/STORY DESCRIPTION: 9/10
PROLOGUE: 13/15
WRITING STYLE: 20/20
PLOT: 18/20
FLOW: 22/25
TOTAL POINTS: 91/100
REVIEW/MESSAGE:
First, the title coordinated with the cover but not actually with the plot or I just missed the point? I really like the book cover, simple but precise. The blurb captured my interest very much because it has something to do with time travels. Although, the story's a bit obvious & predictable BUT the ending nailed it, hands down!
What I admire the most is this author's writing style, polished dialogues and I have no words for your choice of words.
All in all, awesome story! This one deserves a lot of recognition. Padayon!
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Galaxy_Amethyst ● Vox Populi ●
TITLE: 5/5
BOOK COVER: 5/5
BLURB/STORY DESCRIPTION: 10/10
PROLOGUE: 14/15
WRITING STYLE: 17/20
PLOT: 18/20
FLOW: 24/25
TOTAL POINTS: 93/100
REVIEW/MESSAGE:
First, the title is unique enough to caught reader's attention. I actually even researched what Vox Populi means. Next, the blurb stands out even though it is short, it holds power to interest a reader. I like how you started it, you are good at making us curious.
I just noticed your writing style a little off since the characters aren't introduced well. Even though it is just a one-shot, you don't have to make it very short that you're missing important details like "Bakit naging ganoon si Lord Rome?", "Bakit bigla siyang bumait 'nung mamamatay na siya?", "Paano naging ganoon sa bayan nila?". I mean provide clearer details and characterization next time because I'm lost in a nutshell after I finished reading it. Anyways, those are based on my opininon only, it is still up to you whether to take it or not.
Again, this storyline deserves more because it holds the potential to be a novel💖 Sobrang ganda ng title ng blurb pati ng plot, eh. Padayon, manunulat!
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floweryblxxms ● Larawan ng Hangarin ●
TITLE: 5/5
BOOK COVER: 5/5
BLURB/STORY DESCRIPTION: 8/10
PROLOGUE: 13/15
WRITING STYLE: 18/20
PLOT: 20/20
FLOW: 23/25
TOTAL POINTS: 92/100
REVIEW/MESSAGE:
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