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Judge: demigodextraordinare

Beneath the Covers:

 Title: Beneath the Covers 

Topi: During Harry's year at Hogwarts 

Grammer/Spelling: 8 

Title: 10

 Summary: 10 

Characters: 5 

Plan: 10 

Creativity: 10 

Writing Style: 5 

Rules: Followed 

Total score: 58 

 Criticism: The story could have a more stable base. The first few chapters seemed to be in a rush to establish a foundation but overall a good book!


Severus... Reformed:

Title: Severus... Reformed 

 Topic: Marauder's era 

Grammer/Spelling: 8 

 Title: 10 

Summary: 10 

Characters: 10 

Plan: 10 

Creativity: 10 

Writing Style: 5 

Rules: Followed 

Criticism: A brilliant retelling of a both loved and hated character. Only criticism I can offer is to use a bit more simpler words for the description, making it too complicated makes it harder for the reader to enjoy the story


Total Score:

62!!!! 🥳🎉🎊🥳🎉🎊🥳🎉🎊🥳🎉🎊

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