There weren't many participants for this Award so I will update this chapter later with the winners of the overall story. Just like I said in the prize section, the prizes will be:
🥇 New book cover and five chapter arts (I don't have the time to do ten)
🥈 New book cover and one chapter art
🥉 New book cover
Judges: Brand new profile picture or profile banner (choose which one you'd like)
I'll email you all the prizes through your account but if you'd like me to send it another way, please private message me. If you choose Instagram, I will DM you the prizes through my personal account: @ elevenseggos_draws
🥉demigodextraordinare
Judge: @ursisinredunderline
Title: The New Law || Dramione & Blinny
Topic: During Harry's Years in Hogwarts
Grammar/Spelling: 6 (You had a few small grammatical errors)
Title: 8 (It's good but I think "The Marriage Law would be a better title)
Summary: 9
Characters: 4 (There isn't much character development)
Plan: 3 (I'm not trying to be mean, I mean, you said yourself that you didn't have much of a plan)
Creativity: 6 (Just like the plan you didn't really seem to have much creativity)
Writing Style: 8
Rules: Followed
Total Score: 44
Criticism: The story wasn't bad, I just think your grammar and plan wasn't on point. Also, you spelled Gryffindor wrong... Other than that, I really liked your story and I couldn't put it down! I recommend continuing writing your story, it'll really improve your style.
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🥈TOMISANOBSCURIAL (Choose one story below that you want the prize to be given to)
Judge: @demigodextraordinare
Title: Beneath the Covers
Title: Beneath the Covers
Topic: During Harry's year at Hogwarts
Grammer/Spelling: 8
Title: 10
Summary: 10
Characters: 5
Plan: 10
Creativity: 10
Writing Style: 5
Rules: Followed
Total score: 58
Criticism: The story could have a more stable base. The first few chapters seemed to be in a rush to establish a foundation but overall a good book!
Title: Severus... Reformed
Title: Severus... Reformed
Topic: Marauder's era
Grammer/Spelling: 8
Title: 10
Summary: 10
Characters: 10
Plan: 10
Creativity: 10
Writing Style: 5
Rules: Followed
Criticism: A brilliant retelling of a both loved and hated character. Only criticism I can offer is to use a bit more simpler words for the description, making it too complicated makes it harder for the reader to enjoy the story
Creativity: 8 (It seemed very creative but Safi31 said that they read a lot like this before, she just wanted to do their own way)
Writing Style: 10
Rules: 8
Total Score: 72
Critism: So, first of all, I really like the way you organized the chapters :). One thing I found slightly confusing was part of Cho's chapter. It says that she messed things up with Lavender, but I'm not sure what that means. As for the grammar, I think there are just some minor mistakes I'd be happy to point out for you. In the summary, you might want to at least mention the word "baby" once, but otherwise, it's perfectly fine!
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As promised, I will make you both personalized profile pictures/banners. Please choose which you'd like in the comments and I will post it here after they're finished. Thank you!
demigodextraordinare:
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