Evening in Mehta house.
Hearing the calling bell, Avni opens the door. She finds Bebe there and surprised. Avni: Ma'am Aap? Ayiye ander ayiye. Bebe enters. Neela comes. Avni: Maa ye Harleen Ma'am khanna builders ke.. Neela fold her hands: Namste. Bebe: To thum ho Avni ki Maa Mrs. Neela Mehta. Neela also sits. Avni brings water. Bebe: Mere yaha aane ka do do maksat hei. Ek Avni se maafi mangna aur doosra Usse wapas company mei lana. Avni: Nahi..ma' am aap mujhse kyu maafi mang rahe h. Please aap mujhe sharminda mat hone dijiye. Bebe: Office mei jo kuch bhi hua...Avni: Please Ma'am uskeliye aap sorry mat boliye. Aap uswakt office mei nahi thi. Bebe: Beta, agar bache bool kiya tho unke Maa baap ko sir chukana padta hei. Neel tumse bahut buri tarike se behave kiya..bina teri koi galti ke. Avni: Ma'am ( she holds bebe's hands) Ye purani baato ko chod dijiye. Neela: Ha Ma'am It's ok. Let's forget about it. Bebe: Tum ye sab bhul sakti ho? Agar bhul sakti hei to wapas hamare company mei aa jao. Tab mei maan jau ki tum hame maaf kiya hei. Avni: Ma'am par...mein ab meri Maa ke sath khadi hona chahti hu. (Then she explains about Aashish 's condition and problems in company in brief) Bebe: Neela tum bahut nazeeb ho ki tumhe Avni jaisi beti mili hei. Aur tum bhi kitni strong woman jo hei. Himmat rakho. Agar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho to hame yaad karna. Avni : Thank you Ma'am. Bebe: Tum mujhe ma'am mat bulao. Babe bula sakti ho. She gives a side hug to Avni. Bebe: Pata nahi kyu pahli nazar se tum mujhe apnasa lagti hei. Neela teri beti bahut achi hei. Tumhari parvarish ka fal hei. Us taraf wo Neel. Wo hamara ek lota ladla hei isliye itna bigad gaya hei. Babe about to leave. Bebe : I respect your decision to support your mother. But if you wish to join our firm you are always welcome. Avni : Ji. ***Khanna house***
Swetha : Kya? Wo nahi mana? Neel tik hi keh raha hei. Wo bahut ziddi hei. Bebe: Arey nahi swetha. Swetha :Nahi matlab? Aap ne usse maafi maangi Phir bhi wo nahi maani.
Bebe: oho meri swetha, wo isliye nahi join nahi kar rahi hu kyu ki ab Mehta communications mei kuch problems hei aur wo apni Maa ko support karna chahti hei. Neel was listening to all this.
Neel: Mehta communications mei kya problem hei? Bebe tell everyone about problems and also about Aashish 's conditions. Neel is upset hearing all this. Bebe: Mujhe uski decision achi lagi. She is really good. Swetha: Sahi kaha aapne. Neel in mind: kuch bhi karke mujhe Avni ko manana hei. He calls sunehri. ( they talk something) After that he do one more phone call.
Next day**
Sunehri comes to Mehta house. Avni : Sunehri tum, aao. Maa dekho sunehri aayi hei. Sunehri: Tum tik ho na? Avni: Ha...Aaj tum office nahi gayi kya? Suneri: Aaj mei chuti le li. Mujhe kuch kam hei. Neela comes. Neela: beta kaisi hei ? Suneri: tik hu aunty. Aur uncle kaisa hei? Mitali ne sab bataya mujhe. Avni: Papa improve kar rahe hei. Neela : Tumhe khane keliye kuch la doon? Suneri : Actually aunty mujhe Avni se kuch kam tha. Kya mein usse kuch der keliye le ja sakti hu? Neela: Tu kyu permission maang rahi ho? Tumari hi friend hei le jao jaha jana hei to. Avni: Baat kya hei ? Suneri : Wo raaste mei bataungi. Tum jaldi tayyar ho ke aao. ***A big shipping mall in city***
Avni and Sunehri enter there. Avni: Tumhe shopping karni hei. Sunehri: Avni wo DD ...Wo mujhe uske parents ke sath milana chahte hei wo bhi aaj dinner pe. Mujhe rk traditional dress kharidna hei. Chalo. Avni: tik hei. They reach before a restaurant. Sunehri: Avni, pehle ham kuch kha lenge Phir shopping. Tum restaurant mei baito mein ek call karke aaungi. Avni goes and sit in a place. Sunehri goes from there and call Neel. Suneri: Sir Avni ko mene restaurant mei layi hei. Neel: Thank you Sunheri. I am here itself. Sunheri: I don't know how will she react. Neel: Don't worry. I will handle. Sunehri: All the best. Bye.Neel cuts the call. Neel comes near Avni. Avni was checking the menu card so she didn't identified Neel. Avni: Two coffee please. Neel: Akele akele do coffee? Avni turns and surprised to see Neel there. Neel sits near Avni and say: Chalo mein hi company deta hu( smile) Outside sunehri was watching them. Then DD joins.Dd: tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Sunehri ask him to be silent and shows Avniel. They silently watch them. Avni is ill tempered seeing Neel. She gets up from that place and sit in some other place. Neel also follows her and sit next to her. Avni: Why don't u sit somewhere? I don't need ur company. Neel: Kyu ?mere yaha baitne se tumhe problem hei?
Avni: Ye mera table hei. Tum kahi aur jaake baito?
Neel: Par tumhara naam yaha kahi likha hi nahi (he is enjoying the fight)Avni: (irritated ) to Phir tera naam likha hei?
Neel: Ha..dekho chair ke back side pe. Sponsored by Khanna Builders. To mein kahi bhi kabhi bhi bait sakta hu. ( attitude)
Avni: To ye table ke uper hi bait jao. She again gets up and change the place. Neel follows. Outside: DD: yaha kya chair race chal raha he kya? Both smiles. In restaurant. Avni : What's u r problem? (low voice)Aur ye sunehri kaha hei? Neel: Sunehri chali gayi. I sent her to the office. Avni: Matlab? Neel: Ha mene hi sunehri ko beja tha tumhare pas. What else I can do? You will not come if I call you. Avni : Yes. U r right and I am going because I don't have time to waste. She stands up and about to go. Just then Neel holds her hand. Neel: Please Avni, ek baar suno. I admit that I was wrong and I was really harsh to u. But please give me a chance to correct myself. Galtiyon ko sudarne keliye har kisi ko ek moka milna chahiye na? Avni stops but release her hand looking away from Neel. Neel: Oh sorry. Sorry (cutely). Neel: Please be seated. Both of them sit. Avni remains silent. So Neel talks again: Dekho. Please mujhe maaf kardo? Avni: ( with attitude ) seriously? Tume lagta hei ki mein kal ki bath ko leke gussa hoon? Mein sirf aaj mei jeeta hoon. Neel with smile: Ye dialogue kahi suna hei.ha. .yada aya ye mera hi dialogue tha. Avni: Aur kuch kehna he? Nahi to mein jau?
Neel: ( in mind,Ye ladki ya attitude ki dukan) To tumne mujhe maaf kiya?
Avni: Ha.
Neel: (happy) to ek aur baat tum wapas job join karo plz.
Avni : bilkul nahi.
Neel: Kya? Dekho Avni, wo project mera sapna hei aur jis insan ko uska zimmedari diya wo mujhe cheat kiya and u are well aware of our project.. So.. Avni: Sidhe sidhe batao tum darte ho ki mein us project ke details kisi aur ko dedu. Neel: No Avni. I trust u more than any other staff. I was just telling that u r intelligent, smart, loyal and...Avni: I don't appreciate compliments especially from you.
Neel ( in mind : oho..ye ladki bhi na...) I know ur problems. Tum apni mom ko support karna chahti ho right? I can help you.
Avni: Mujhe kisi ki help nahi chahiye apne problems mein khud solve karoongi.
Neel: you had helped me, right?
Avni : Wo help nahi meri job tha.
Neel: Agar ek staff company keliye itna kuch kar sakti ho to mujhe bhi uskeliye kuch karna chahiye. See agar tum count karna chahti hei to hissa barabar ho jayega.
Avni: Tum kya help kar sakte ho?
To be continued.
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Tu Jo Mila
FanfictionIt is the story of Avni and Neil. Their love story was not an easy one. Their life went through a lot of challenges. This is written more like a script than a story and includes plenty of hindi dialogues. This was my first attempt so, there will b...