Authors prov~ sorry but I have just edited the whole of chapter one....
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Chapter 1
There he sat immersed in his thoughts not even realising what time it was, as he peered out the old and rusted window he saw a glint of light emerging from the darkness, it was nearly sunrise.
"Harry Potter" he thought to himself "the boy who lived" but had he really lived at all?
Harry stood up as his eyes explored the newly renovated Griffindor Common Room as the shadows of the brightly lit fireplace danced around the room.
As he left the Common Room he headed straight to his chambers, Harry snuck In as quietly as he could making sure not to wake Ron as he snored away into the night, hoping he would get some sleep before the day officially started.
Ronald Weasley awoke as the sun shone brightly through the uncovered window
"Harry get up or we'll be late for breakfast"
Harry Potter soon too awoke, he looked as if he had been attacked by a pack of dementors.
"Harry can you hear that?" Ron asks with puzzled expression, they both fell silent but the sound Ron had heard before suddenly stopped.
Both boys got up and dressed, as they headed to the Dining Hall for breakfast they were accompanied by Hermione Granger, as they entered the hall the first thing they noticed was Professor McGonnagul sitting in the headmasters seat, "So it's true then old McGonnagul is now headmaster" Hermione says with a shocked expression "Brilliant wouldn't have it any other way" She continued, just as they took their seats Headmaster McGonnagul stood up raising her glass gracefully and tapping the side gently with a small silver butter knife
"As some of you may not know" she says eyeing all the fist years "I am sitting in the same seat two of the best men have sat in, Severus Snape and Albus Dumbledore, two of the most respected Headmasters this school has seen" she continues as she clears her throat "I will promise to keep there teachings alive at this school, and to remind you all as the great Albus Dumbledore one said, those who are lost In the darkest times will always find light thank you, oh and one more thing Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy are to return to my office as soon as breakfast has finished" Harry peered over to the Slytherin table, he and Draco Malfoy's eyes met, they were both so anxious and eager to find out what McGonnagul wanted.
With a snap of McGonagull's fingers bowls and plates of food appeared.
Pancakes, bacon and eggs, everything you could ever imagine in a perfect breakfast, this was turning out better then Harry expected.
"So Harry what do you think McGonagull wants." Hermione asks while downing her breakfast quickly.
"I'm not sure but I'm quite nervous"
Draco's prov ~
After all this school has brought upon me I'm not sure returning back is the right choice, just knowing I have to go though another year of potions is just dreadful and don't get me started on Harry Potter and his two annoying accomplice's.
Blaze has just entered the room wearing our matching black suits, I guess he's still pissed off at me
"We better head off to the dining hall and get a glimpse of this years failures" he says
I'm quite nervous, it feels like the old days when I didn't have to worry about failing the orders I was given, all the weight has been taken off my shoulders and I can finally breathe again.
"You go ahead I have to check something out" I say hoping he'll just leave without hesitation, Blaze simply nods and walks out the room.
I walk to the dresser thoughts racing through my head, I look at the picture of my parents, if things didn't end the way they did maybe my father would be able to look at me again without the look of disgust and disappointment.
I glance back at the picture before I leave the Slytherin chambers, it's like a ghost house walking through these corridors alone, as I reach the top of the corridor directly opposite the dining hall I can finally hear the sound of life; people laughing, talking and all I want to do is scream, Knesset shaking at the bones.
"Breathe" I say to my self as I'm about to enter through the door way, what made things worse was when the door creaked open loud enough for everyone in the dining hall to hear, as I walk in I'm greeted by faces of shock and horror, I guess people weren't expecting me to return.
I turn and walk down the row of Slytherin's, I can hear people whispering all sorts of things like "I heard he was working for the dark lord" are you serious? It's not like I'm going to eat their souls or something arghh old McGonnagul is still blabbering on about something.
As soon as I take a seat I hear McGonnagul say these words "oh and one more thing Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy are to return to my office as soon as breakfast has finished"
What could she possibly want with my life, it mustn't be good if Harry Potter is involved, I turn and mine and Harry's eyes meet.
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Harry Potter, Draco's Story- The Change
Fiksi RemajaHarry potter and friends are back at hogwarts again and are put on a important mission with none other then himself Draco Malfoy. Along the way Draco and Harry each find love..... But will it last?