Book Name : Pyaar Bhi Dard Bhi
Author: Love_u_cid
Title (10/10) : Very nice title and it suits the story very much.
Blurb(8/10) :- Blurb or description is very important for a story. By reading the story we know that it is about the love of 2 CID officers. Blurb didn't describe much. Please look after it.
Cover( 7/10): Cover is good. Male lead face is not visible clearly. Even the colour used is not so attractive.
Plot(8/10): The plot is nice but little bit boring in between the story. Except that, it was nice. But I didn't understand why Daya was insecure about his feelings?
Character development ( 10/10): Well described and has clarity of character.
Grammar(9/10) : No mistakes at all.
Flow( 8/10): Flow of the story is nice but little bit boring in middle. Little confusion was there about daya's feeling. I couldn't understand what did he fight for.
Dialogue Expression (8/10): Since it is one shot story, dialogue and the expression aren't differentiated. Please use different font or bold font for the dialogues. Please avoid (....) in between a sentence.
Creativity/Originality (10/10): Writer penned down her own imagination in the story. It's very nice and unique.
Overall( 9/10): Over all it was a nice story. Plot and flow is nice but little bit boring in middle. No mistakes in grammar.
Score: (87/100)
Book name: Teri ladki main
Author: SamainaStoryBooth
Marks and Review:
Title(8/10) : Title is good but not attractive. Try something new and creative.
Blurb(8/10) The blurb or description is important one for a story which gives idea of the story. It contains emotional scenes, which touches readers' heart. The story is about a father and daughter's relationship.
Cover(10/10): The cover is attractive. And the font is stylish, which attracted me the most.
Plot( 9/10): The plot is nice. It went with a smooth flow. It's all about emotions. Nice plot.
Character development (7/10): Characters were not mentioned properly. I had a confusion about character.
Grammar( 9/10):There was few grammar mistakes. The writer typed wrongly many times so I couldn't to understand the sentence properly.
Flow(8/10): Flow is good. But in between it was little bit boring. Except that, it's perfect.
Dialogue Expression (9/10):- Dialogue are not clearly mentioned. By reading each line, we can understand it. I would suggest you to differentiate between dialogue and narration by changing fonts.
Creativity/ originality (10/10): This story is unique. Your own creativity and your own ideas are explicite. I loved your creativity.
Overall( 9/10): Over all the story is nice with an emotional flow. Plot is nice. Apart from a little bit grammar mistakes and characters confusion, that story is awesome.
Score : 87/100
Book name:- Promise till eternity
Author: the_lost_stories
Marks and Review:
Title(9/10):- The title is nice and common but apt for the story, I would suggest you to think more creatively in this.
