Title: The Enchanted
Written By:pretty_poison_
Title: 9.5/10
I really like the title.It goes well with the story.
Blurb: 10/10
Blurb is just perfect no need to add or subtract anything.
Cover: 8/10
I really like the cover.The clearity is just perfect.But your name is not clearly visible I literally had to look for your name so you can work on that.
Plot: 9/10
The plot is really good.
Character Development: 8.5/10
Character development was at good pace but could have been better.
Grammar: 9/10
I didn't find any major grammatical mistakes which is very good.Keep it up.
Flow:8.5/10
Flow was smooth.At some time I felt it went too fast but that's ok
Dialogues/ Expression: 9/10
Creativity/ Originality: 8.5/10
For originality you get 10 on 10 but you could have been a little more creative at some places
Overall: 9/10
Total: 90/100
Title:Memory Shielders
Written by: Cluster_of_thoughts
Title: 9.5/10
I like your title very much.Good !!
Blurb: 10/10
Blurb is just perfect.Required information is provided.
Cover: 9.5/10
I like your cover as well.The picture of a girl perfectly goes with the story.
Plot: 9/10
Plot is quite unique.I personally like such stories.
Character Development: 9/10
Character development was smooth.The confusion in the starting of the girl was well described.
Grammar: 9.5/10
I didn't find any such grammatical error.You have a good sense of grammar I must say.
Flow:9/10
Flow was not disrupted anywhere in between.
Dialogues/ Expression: 8.5/10
Dialogues are nice but could have been better .
Creativity/ Originality: 9.5/10
For creativity it's 100 on 100. Impressive is the word.
Overall: 9/10
An overall basis it's a very good story.I just couldn't find any major mistake.But yes I can suggest you one thing that is try to write dialogues in bold which would make it easier for the readers to understand that the conversation starts from here.Otherwise, you have done a nice job.
Total: 92.5/100
Title: Death Alley
Written By:the_snek
Title: 9.5/10
I really liked the title and it goes well with the story.
Blurb: 9/10
Blurb is just awesome.I found it curious as a reader.But a little creativity could have made it perfect.
Cover: 8/10
Cover is nice.And the iron stick in man's hand is just so good.The subtitle is good. One thing which you could improve is add a picture of a scared girl or something like which will give a revenge touch.
Plot: 9/10
Plot is really different from what I have read till now.
Character Development: 9/10
Radhika is the main character and a proper attention is given to her .Her feelings are perfectly described.Other characters are also well described.
Grammar: 8/10
I didn't find any major grammatical error.Your vocabulary is good.But there are some typo mistakes.
Flow:9/10
Scenes are described well and the horror thing is nicely described.
Dialogues/ Expression: 8/10
There are not many dialogues but still wherever they are it's written nicely.
Creativity/ Originality: 8/10
It's a very different plot.I liked it.Chapters are interesting enough to keep the readers hooked up.
Overall: 7.5/10
On an overall basis, it's a good attempt.You need to work a little on blurb.And also a little on grammar.Try to increase the length of the chapters.I felt that they are short.I really liked the STEP STEP thing.
Total: 85/100
Title: UNBELIEVABLE
Written By:RihantKajla
Title: 9/10
The title is quite interesting.It makes a reader think 'What's unbelievable?'.So, a good work.
Blurb: 7/10
You can surely work on the blurb.Just present the incidents in a better way.The blurb contains what it must but not appealing enough to attract the readers.It sounds more like an obsession.
Cover: 6/10
In the cover I found the texts are misplaced.Also if we see the blurb and then the cover then there is no connection.I guess you can go for a change.
Plot: 9/10
Plot is really different from what I have read till now.
Character Development: 9/10
Radhika is the main character and a proper attention is given to her .Her feelings are perfectly described.Other characters are also well described.
Grammar: 6/10
In my opinion, you really need to work on this part.Punctuation marks have not been used.I would suggest you to go for editing.
Flow:6.5/10
The flow is interrupted due to the writing style.It feels disturbing.
Dialogues/ Expression: 7.5/10
When writing dialogues you must use double quotes.You did it so good.But try to use full stops or question marks in place of (....) You are using this a lot .
Creativity/ Originality: 7/10
The plot is quite interesting.But the way you have presented it doesn't seem interesting.
Overall: 7.5/10
An overall basis it's a good plot.You need to make some changes. Try changing the cover and blurb.Try to change your writing style and also make the Chapters look more arranged,sorted and clean.Your chapters seem a mess. These few changes can make a great difference.
Total: 74.5/100
Winner is Memory Shielders by Cluster_of_thoughts
1st runner up The Enchanted by pretty_poison_
Because of less entries there is only two winners...
Congrats👏👏👏👏👏
