Book name: An accident
Written by : chahak_trivedi_0307
Title-7/10
Blurb-0/10
Cover - 6/10
Plot- 6/10
Character development-7/10
Grammar-6/10
Flow- 7/10
Dialogue/Expression- 3/10
Creativity/originality-7/10
Overall - 6/10
Total- 55/100
In the very first chapters, there is no space between lines, it's all messed up together. Add space to distinguish between dialogues/paragraphs.
Secondly, , Hindi dialogues. It was mentioned in rules, book must be in English with only a little in Hindi. I'm sorry dear, but Hindi isn't my mother tongue nor did I study it much in school. Though I understand much, it is very difficult for me. You can probably see, points are deducted in that area.
The plot of arranged marriage, cute love is too cliche, and there is not much difference between your book and others! you need something to make your book stand out in public.
The thing which I should have mentioned first, the blurb is just one sentence, "saccha pyaar kabhi marta nahi", you really need to construct a better blurb.
Overall, it was a good book.
Book name: True love
Written by : itskhushichauhan
Title-6/10
Blurb-0/10
Cover - 2/10
Plot- 7/10
Character development- 7/10
Grammar-6/10
Flow- 7/10
Dialogue/Expression- 5/10
Creativity/originality-7/10
Overall -5 /10
Total- 52/90
The is good but it can be better, coming to cover it's just one simple picture. You need to change it.
There is no blurb in the book, just four words, "Kavin Purvi Love Story," Readers come over and start reading your book only if they like the blurb, but in this case there is no blurb.
Next, Hindi dialogues. It was mentioned in rules, book must be in English with only a little in Hindi. I'm sorry dear, but Hindi isn't my mother tongue nor did I study it much in school. Though I understand much, it is very difficult for me. You can probably see, points are deducted in that area.
Coming to grammar area, you have not followed some basic rules of Grammar, you need a heavy editing here!
Overall, it was good.
Book name: Whom Will He Choose?
Written by : Confused_Soul_Kriya
Title-8/10
Blurb-8/10
Cover - 7/10
Plot- 6/10
Character development- 8/10
Grammar-9/10
Flow- 9/10
Dialogue/Expression- 8/10
Creativity/originality-8/10
Overall - 9/10
Total- 80/100
The book was really good.
The book really went through unexpected turns at some places, at some point I guess AnuPre but twists, man those were really some good ones!
Even though, the love triangle plot is common but your way of presentation was good.
The book kept me hooked till end.
However, I was left unsatisfied with Nandini's point of view.
Getting she wasn't some saint, but he broke her two times, one before engagement and one before marriage.
Her views are as important as AnuPre's but they weren't given much importance, and I was disappointed there!
