Book name: Swasan- Don’t I deserve a little bit of love
Written by: PrincessSwara
Title: 9/10
Your title is very good and apt for your story.
Blurb: 9/10
You have given the detailed description about your story which increases my curiosity to read the story.
Cover: 9/10
Your cover is good and unique.
Plot: 9/10
The plot is very unique and creative.
Character development:9/10
Characters are beautifully explained.
Grammar: 9/10
Your grammar is good and I didn’t see any grammatical error.
Flow: 9/10
The flow of your story is good and I didn’t find any interruptions in it.
Dialogue/Expression: 9/10
I just loved the way you described your story.
Creativity/Originality: 9/10
The story is very unique and creative.
Overall:9/10
I really loved this story. You explained everything well. And I kind of read all the os.
Total score: 90/100
Book name: Avneil OS
Written by: RiyaMaji
Title: 8/10
Your title is very good but it could have been more unique.
Blurb: 7/10
You have given all the titles of your one shots here. Which is very easy to know what will we be reading.
Cover: 9/10
Your cover is good and unique.
Plot: 9/10
The plot is very unique and creative.
Character development:9/10
Characters are beautifully explained.
Grammar: 9/10
Your grammar is good and I didn’t see any grammatical error.
Flow:
Since it’s one shot I am not giving any mark for this.
Dialogue/Expression: 9/10
I just loved the way you described your story.
Creativity/Originality: 9/10
The story is very unique and creative.
Overall:18/20
I really loved this story. You explained everything well. And I kinda read all the os.
Total score: 87/100
All the best for your future dear..
Book name: Sorceress: The Seventh Avenger
Writer- ToriGreen24
Title- 8.5/10
Blurb- 8/10
Cover- 6/10
Plot- 9.5/10
Character development- 9/10
Grammar- 9.5/10
Flow- 9/10
Dialogue/Expression- 9/10
Creativity/Originality- 9.5/10
Overall- 9/10
Total Marks- 87/100
Review:
The title was great. Worked really well with the book and it helps grab the attention. The blurb did its job. It was short, precise and eye- catching. The cover could have been a little better. The plot was amazing. It was a smart idea trying to add a little twist.
Character development was great as
well. The flow was perfect. Your creativity is amazing. Bringing Hogwarts and Avengers together was superb. Great great great book. Keep it up.
