Writing Notes

Science Storm

Today, we had to make a sales pitch to the people on Shark Tank. An investor. (Not for real, just to our teacher.)

Here it is!

Science Storm

Are you a lover of underwater science? Do you find marine biology fascinating? Have you ever wondered what amazing, undiscovered biology is living beneath the ocean? Then this is the product for you.

My sales pitch is geared toward students, studying abroad the sea. The industry and background I come from is the medical research, and my product was designed to help students researching the underwater medical area.

My product is simple. It is a new kind of microscope, one that has never before shown it's face to the world. However, that world will be forever changed if you choose to accept my speech and fund more of my product. This microscope has been through a complicated series of tests to get the point it is at today. Now, it has been shown to surpass all others in its field.

I urge you to accept my sales pitch for three reasons.

One, it is a sound product. As I mentioned previously, it has been through much testing. It is a type of microscope that will change our views on marine biology, and, more importantly, medicine. Which brings me to my next reason.

The medical facets of this product are amazing. With my design, students and professors studying underwater science will be able to see things never discovered before, and it will push the medical world much farther.

Lastly, the expenses needed to create this product are extremely low for something as incredibly advanced as my product. At fifteen percent lower prices than any other design of its quality, this product's expenses are lower than any other in it's field.

This is my sales speech. I hope you carefully consider my reasoning.

Thank you.

I incorporated some of the things I learned from debate in too.

Would you invest in this, if you had the money?

- Total_KOTLC_Fan