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The world has been thrown into chaos, cause the world knows of the existence of vampires. That they have been living along side them for centuries without being discover...

Note on this first part of my ultimate story and first piece, any of my writings are to be approached with an open mind and are made as 'food for thought', for it is you...

Well these are some random sory ideas sitting around in my head so yeah. Tell me what you think! They might even become reality with enough feedback....

just some stuff I wrote that I need constructive criticism, feedback and tips for please give me ur opinion!!!!!

I'll write more if you guys like it!

Short stories for several other stories I'm writing. Give me feedback. Some spoilers may be in order.

Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?

Murder Mystery. Part 3 done! Will add more soon. First piece, please give feedback NO HATE. ~Updated 1/1/17

A short story I wrote as part of a transfer application into the Tisch School of the Arts. It's something I wrote a while ago and now that it's time for submission, I'm...

So, I've been working on a few different stories recently to improve my writing, many of which being JJK stories! None of them have progressed much (I think the longest...

Idk yet. this was based off a dream that I had last night

Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better s...

My short story on how 6th grade mixed me up.

In 1996, A young man with a quiet life makes a strange discovery that alters his sense of reality; nothing makes sense, as he is somehow transported into the future- all...

life, thoughts. everything summed up into 917 characters. you wouldn't understand much but, let your mind soak up the words and take them to heart just a little bit.

-Mia: sweet, kind, unpopular -Toby:secertly likes Mia, kind, somewhat popular -Ryan: total badboy, popular. Mia fall in what she thinks is love with her best friend's en...