Feedbackplease Stories

So, I've been working on a few different stories recently to improve my writing, many of which being JJK stories! None of them have progressed much (I think the longest...

Idk yet. this was based off a dream that I had last night

First it was the dreams. It's how he communicated with me. Now, it's more than dreams. And it's real. If I want to get out of this alive, do I trust him? Or do I trust...

In 1996, A young man with a quiet life makes a strange discovery that alters his sense of reality; nothing makes sense, as he is somehow transported into the future- all...

This is a fantasy story about a boy living in a land ruled by a tyrant. Poverty, and crime are rampant in the streets and he took to stealing for survival but gets caugh...

My short story on how 6th grade mixed me up.

Well these are some random sory ideas sitting around in my head so yeah. Tell me what you think! They might even become reality with enough feedback....

-Mia: sweet, kind, unpopular -Toby:secertly likes Mia, kind, somewhat popular -Ryan: total badboy, popular. Mia fall in what she thinks is love with her best friend's en...

Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?

Murder Mystery. Part 3 done! Will add more soon. First piece, please give feedback NO HATE. ~Updated 1/1/17

life, thoughts. everything summed up into 917 characters. you wouldn't understand much but, let your mind soak up the words and take them to heart just a little bit.

just some stuff I wrote that I need constructive criticism, feedback and tips for please give me ur opinion!!!!!

A short story I wrote as part of a transfer application into the Tisch School of the Arts. It's something I wrote a while ago and now that it's time for submission, I'm...

Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better s...

The world has been thrown into chaos, cause the world knows of the existence of vampires. That they have been living along side them for centuries without being discover...