Whispers from The Land of Magic: Book 1

Spyrata finds a new part of the world that she has never seen before, and is forced to accompany her friends in a quest to save a Broken Hero.

This is just the first draft for now, and I would like people to tell me if I made any mistakes or if the story has any plot holes. You guys are my beta readers and you are majorly important in the making of my book.