GraceKnight5

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          	Mad yet? You should be.

ChristyKozalMarshall

Wow, your profile alone scares the hell out of me... But straight forward, honest opinions are what I am looking for. I've been reading on wattpad for years but just decided to try writing my own story about a month and a half ago. I don't expect great reviews seeing how I'm a virgin when it comes to writing.. But any feedback you can give me will be much appreciated. I have someone that says she will edit for me, but nothing has been done yet.. I write from my iPhone so when I upload it to the actual wattpad website all of my italics, bold lettering and spacing seems to disappear. It is extremely aggravating and and practically impossible to fix from my phone so I hope that you can overlook those issues.. One of these days, hopefully in the near future, it will be edited and fixed. My book is rated R so you have to be a follower to read certain parts. Chapters 1 and 4 are both labeled private. If you don't want to follow me just to read it, I understand.. maybe just check out the parts that it will allow and let me know what you think? Hope to hear from you soon!
                                      Thanks in advance,
                                                    Christy.

GraceKnight5

Hello to my lovely followers and welcome to my equally lovely new ones! I'm looking for a book to do for The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly. I'm looking for something that doesn't have grammar or spelling problems for me to pick on. Nothing that simple. Make me go deep!

CelticRose

@GraceKnight5 I really liked your critiques in The Good, Bad and the Ugly - they are very insightful and helpful. 'm currently editing a fantasy novel for submission to editors and agents - the version on wattpad is the unedited version, the edited version has had the first 5 chapters reworked completely and lost over 20K words. I would very much like another opinion on the unedited draft to compare with the one I'm working on now - if you see what I mean - which will help me tremendously. I'm sure you're very busy with critiques, and mine is a full length novel, so I do appreciate that you may not be able to get around to it! It's called the Book of Fate if you do think that's something you might be able to look at. Absolutely no worries if not - I appreciate your work very much!