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Mar 18, 2021 05:54PM
No one ever sees these, but the smallest things put me off books; Dialogue is wordy and not natural, dialogue isn’t broken up, grammar is poor, plot is nice but execution is subpar, plot is nice but...View all Conversations
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Nayeli is a shy and mysterious human. She never knew about the existence of werewolves. She lost her parents...
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