The TinyTan Awards 2020 [CONCLUDED]

[Reviews of MYG]

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You can find the reviews of the Min Yoongi category on this chapter!

Stay tuned for the rest!

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My Kitty ~ weirdowithabeirdo 

Book Cover: (3.5 / 5)

Book Title: (5 / 5)

Description: (3 / 10)

Story Plot: (20 / 20)

Characters: (20 / 20)

Flow/Emotions: (20 / 20)

Grammar/Punctuation: (18.5 / 20)

Note: The cover didn't draw me into checking the book out. The description didn't make me want to click the read button and wasn't interesting. I recommend you add more to it without of course giving away too much of the plot. For the story itself, it was really good. The character's all had their own personalities and were realistic. The book flowed at a normal pace and never left me confused at any time. 

There were some grammar mistakes though, which I'll give some examples. Don't say 'OMG!' spell it out and instead say 'Oh my god!' Sentences should never start with 'and' 'but' or 'because'. 

For dialogues make sure to add a punctuation mark at the end of the sentence and before the last ". Don't add commas between the " and the next sentence. I'll give an example from ch 13.

"Ah, Chim Chim got a girlfriend huh?" , I teased as he hid his face with his hands.

Instead, it should be:

"Ah, Chim Chim got a girlfriend, huh?" I teased as he hid his face with his hands.

I also noticed commas in places they shouldn't have been and vice versa. An example of that is also in the example above. There should have been a comma before 'huh' and there wasn't. There were also misspelled words, extra words added into sentences, and sentences that had a word left out when it should have been there. Other than those mistakes I enjoyed reading the story and will definitely finish reading it!

Judged by : 1800HongjoongsMullet 

Total: 90/100  

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My Wicked Secretary ~ AgustDingDong 

Book Cover: (2 / 5)

Book Title: (5 / 5)

Description: (2 / 10)

Story Plot: (14 / 20)

Characters: (14 / 20)

Flow/Emotions: (13 / 20)

Grammar/Punctuation: (10 / 20)

Note: The cover and description didn't draw me in. From the description, I was immediately able to tell that it was going to be a secretary AU that I've read many times which I was correct. The plot was overused but the only different thing is that the secretary (the reader) was very rude. The plot moved at a normal pace for the most part but some of the time skips between chapters threw me off a couple of times. The characters were unrealistic at times and there were a ton of grammar mistakes throughout the book. I'll give an example of a couple of mistakes. Words were misspelled. There were extra words added to sentences when they shouldn't have been. Some words were left out which made me have to stop several times and try to piece together what you were trying to say. These are a couple of examples but I definitely recommend that you revise or find someone to do it.