The TinyTan Awards 2020 [CONCLUDED]

[Reviews of ONESHOTS]

Welcome back, guys!

Here we are with the reviews of each and every participant from the Oneshot category!

Stay tuned for the next three categories' reviews by the judges!

1]

Author: -sxhnshine- 

Title: Unexpected Claim [KTH]

Category: Oneshots

Book Cover:    (4 / 5)

Book Title:    (3.5 / 5)

Description:    (3 / 10)

Story Plot:    (15 / 20)

Characters:    (19 / 20)

Flow/Emotions:    (18 / 20)

Grammar/Punctuation:    (19 / 20)

Total:    (81.5 / 100)

Judged by : 1800HongjoongsMullet

Note: The story didn't excite me and I only finished it for the sake of the awards. The description, it was hard to read it due to the font you used. The plot is cliche, and overused, but it did move at a normal pace. There were also minor grammar mistakes. Remember; Don't start a sentence with 'and', 'but', or 'because'.

2]

Author: taekoo_kii

Title: Balloon [TaeKook]

Category: Oneshots

Book Cover:    (5 / 5)

Book Title:    (5 / 5)

Description:    (10 / 10)

Story Plot:    (20 / 20)

Characters:    (20 / 20)

Flow/Emotions:    (18 / 20)

Grammar/Punctuation:    (17 / 20)

Total:    (95 / 100)

Judged by : 1800HongjoongsMullet

Note: I really enjoyed reading this story! I will definitely be recommending this story to my friends. The biggest problem I had when reading was grammar/punctuation. It a couple of times made me have to reread a sentence and try to piece together what you were saying. There were also sentences that didn't have punctuation. I recommend you revise.

Note from Host : If there was a fourth place award, that would have definitely been you! Keep it up, taekoo_kii! You can always aim higher!