[Reviews of KSJ]

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You can find the reviews of the Kim Seokjin category on this chapter!

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An Outcast ~ moonjin97 

Book Cover: (2.5 / 5)

Book Title: (5 / 5)

Description: (1 / 10)

Story Plot: (20 / 20)

Characters: (20 / 20)

Flow/Emotions: (20 / 20)

Grammar/Punctuation: (18.5 / 20)

Note: I enjoyed reading this story, but some small changes need to be made. The cover matched the story, but didn't draw me in. The description was waaaaaaaay too short and didn't draw me in. I suggest adding more to it. Minor grammar mistakes. Some words missing from sentences and extra added in words that shouldn't have been there. Sentences also should never start with 'and' 'but' or 'because.'

Judged by : 1800HongjoongsMullet 

Total: 87/100


2]

🥇 By Your Side ~ chimphony 🥇

Book Cover: (5 / 5)

Book Title: (5 / 5)

Description: (10 / 10)

Story Plot: (20 / 20)

Characters: (20 / 20)

Flow/Emotions: (20 / 20)

Grammar/Punctuation: (19.5 / 20)

Note: I love this book! The plot is unique and the characters are realistic. Descriptive writing which is great because I was able to picture everything happening. There were only a couple of grammar errors. Don't start sentences with 'and' 'but' or 'because'.

Judged by : 1800HongjoongsMullet 

Total: 99.5/100


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The Butterfly Princess ~ amujane 

Book cover 5/5

Relevant

Book title 5/5

Description 10/10

Simple but gives all the needed info and makes the reader curious.

Story plot 19/20

At the beginning it sounds like a story where bangtan and the lead roles start off on the wrong foot and then make up later but later on it gets good!!

The fact that the author took Disney princesses as significant others for bangtan is cute too.

Character development 20/20

Story flow 18/20

A bit more clarity required.

Instead of using some frequently used words you could go for some other relevant words.

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