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Past, Very Stupid Fetus Author:

【Thank you for reading this silly little book! I think I really should do a bit of editing on specific chapters and improve a few sentences or possibly paragraphs that I feel like I should.
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I've tried to reread this except differently this time, viewing it in the perspective of an outsider, completely new to the book and has no idea about the contents of the plot. And I must say, A few words/sentences feel  too much or ooc. With those, I figured which to improve and change them up.
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I'm quite proud of this book overall. Its my first public one (ònó ; ) It isn't the best. I haven't got a clue on who is supposed to be grading my book but I guess It's you readers. Thank you for your time!】
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