louis's pov
after y/n and i go our own ways i catch myself smiling as she comes into my head. the first time i saw her, i knew she was different. the way her eyes glistened in the light, the way her skin glows when the sun hits her face, her voice is like music to my ears. i reach my house and knock on my door. my mother answers the door with a smile.
louis's mum: "okay you are home. what would you like for dinner?"
l: "actually, y/n's mum has invited me over for dinner and y/n invited me for a sleepover so i was wondering if i could go?"
louis's mum: "of course, get your bag ready and i can drop you off."
l: "perfect thank you!"
i run upstairs and get my back ready. but then i realised something. how does y/n's mum know about me? did y/n tell her? while i'm packing my bag i hear a knock. it's millie, my younger sister.
l: "come in!"
m: "i heard you are going to y/n's"
l: "yeah and you are not going"
i already knew she was gonna say that. ever since i've met y/n i've told my whole family about her. except millie. millie always ruins my chance if she thinks they are not good for me. looks like she found out anyway. i really like y/n and i can't let anyone ruin this.
m: "but why?" millie said pulling the 'y'
l: "you know why."
m: "they weren't right for you"
l: "and that's for my to decide"
millie's mouth opened to protect but instead i cut her off by saying
l: "i'm getting late, bye"
millie pouted at me and i ran downstairs.
louis's mum: "ready to go?"
l: "yes!"
we jumped in the car and we made our way...
a/n
hey guys, i hope you enjoyed this chapter. i thought it would be fun to have a chapter from louis's point of view. if you enjoyed it that way, let me know and i'll make more of louis's point of view. if there are any mistakes sorry. if you have any requests, leave them in the comments or private message me if you are not comfortable. please vote and share it really helps. stay safe.
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