Black Gold Reviews - Closed For Catchup

Review VI

Reviewer: ebrus999

Author: dazzlingmeteors

Title: The stone cold boy

Title(5/5)

The title was straight to the point. Gave you the information you need about the story

Cover(4.5/5)

I like the cover a lot because it communicates the vibe of the story so well and it's simple. My one problem with it though was that the author name in the cover was rarely visible. I could see it but couldn't read it.

Blurb(6/10)

I feel like the blurb, it's good but it puts you off track.

The words on the blurb were "almost forgotten feelings" but the first chapter of the book and the chapters that followed did not suggest that Mila was over her feelings for Tobias or even close to forgetting them.
And it's just very plain for me.

Character development (8/15)

I feel like the only character developed in this story was Mila. I know the story is not that far gone so maybe the rest characters will be developed on as the story goes on.

Plot and flow of the story(7/15)

The story plot is a really cliché one and it's been used a lot but everything depend on you making your story as unique as you as possible can. Making it different. The flow of the story kinda put me off a bit, It was confusing. Like what happens to Mila after her encounter with Tobias? how did she leave the orphanage? What happened to Tobias after ? What was his parents doing there in the first place? 
Yeah the story just began but there should be some reference of this questions to fill in some gaps for the readers.

Creative and writing style (8/15)

Your writing style is great and I like the use of interesting and expressive words which you nailed! Like I said the storyline is very cliché and I know as the story progress we will see more of your creativity.

Vocabulary (7/10)

Like I said before you killed the vocabulary of this story! The words used were not complex and they were
exciting if you get what I mean.

Grammar and spelling (6/10)

I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes. The spelling mistakes was minimum though. One grammar mistake I noticed a lot was the use of 'went' instead of 'go' so please fix those.

Interaction with readers (1/5)

Interaction with readers was not established.

Overall enjoyment (7/10)

I really liked the story and I kinda want more chapters right now!😂

Total score: 59/100
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Ebrus999💕💕