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Username: youngwriter1235
Title: children of tragedy.
Reviewer: ebrus999

Title(5/5)

Title is good, it draws readers attention.

Cover(5/5)

The cover goes well with the story, it's unique,simple and detailed.

Blurb(6/10)

The description for me is too short. I feel like you should make it a little longer with a few insights into the story to get the readers curiosity at a peak.

Character development (14/15)

I like how you portray each character with  passion and uniqueness.

Plot and flow of the story (14/15)

The plot is good and I like the way it builds up with the storyline.

Creative and writing style (15/15)

I like your writing style, it has detailed description and it gives a mental picture of what you're reading. It's also very creative.

Vocabulary (10/10)

You did a good job in you vocabulary, Impressive.

Grammar and spelling (10/10)

You did a great job, I found no grammar error or spelling mistake.

Interaction with readers (4/5)

You need to work a little on this. Reply to all their comments if you can. And try adding the line 'thanks for reading' in all your chapters.

Overall engagement (10/10)

I really enjoyed this book and I'll totally reread it if I have the time.
Nice work.

Total score: 93/100
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Thanks! I Hope this review helps.
Ebrus999❤

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