Username: vanshikasoin999
Title: life of an introvert.
Reviewer: ebrus999
Title (4/5)
It's very straight forward but I feel like it gives away too much of the story.
Cover (5/5)
I personally like the cover a lot, simple but attractive.
Blurb (5/10)
For me the blurb is too plain, it lacks thrill and doesn't make me curious about the book.
Character development (11/15)
There was no detailed description of the characters but situations in the book and their reaction to them painted quite a picture of them. Really nice.
Plot and flow of the story (13/15)
The plot is creative but I feel like the story is moving at a really fast place, for example their was only one instance of her anxiety and nervousness before she got over it.
Creative and writing style (15/15)
The storyline is pretty interesting and you were able to create this feeling of belonging with your characters, very special.
Vocabulary (10/10)
The words used were common and easy to understand.
Grammar and spelling (5/10)
There were a lot of grammar mistakes and I think that this is due to the fact that the book is written in a first person pov which you have not yet mastered. Please try to correct them as they discourage readers, if possible change the book to a third person pov instead.
Interaction with readers (2/5)
Very few of the comments were replied to and author's note was present in just four chapter. I know how happy I feel when my comments are replied to, it means it's appreciated and seen, so please try to reply to as much comments as you can.
Overall enjoyment (10/10)
I was so drawn into this book I forgot to vote till I read it all and that's a good thing, great job.
Total scores: 80/100
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Thanks, hope this review helps.
Ebrus999❤
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