Black Gold Reviews - Closed For Catchup

Review IX

Author name: AsheraJones
Book title: Broken by Design
Reviewer: ebrus999

Title (4/5)

I honestly don't get the relation of this title to the story for now but it fits so well and draws readers' attention so it's a fitting chapter

Cover(4/5)
This book cover is beautiful, although some of the texts are hard to read, I love the simplicity of it.

Blurb (6/10)

I felt like the blurb was lacking in some way. I had gotten excited after the first part but towards the end I felt like it was bland and I wanted more, to push me into reading the book, it felt like the blurb wasn't completed.

Character development (12/15)

This was well established, I got the idea of what most of the characters were like and was able to associate emotions to them, like how I love Tristan's character, hate chase and just think Livia's stupid

Plot and story flow(10/15)

I felt like the story plot was quite cliché but since the story has not gone far I can't say for sure. Waiting for the twists you'll add. The story flow is steady.

Creative and writing style (11/15)

Like I said earlier the plot is a bit cliche but I can't wait for when you make a creative spin on it, since the book has not gone far yet I can't comment on this. Your writing style is beautiful and you did a great job of portraying their emotions

Vocabulary (8/10)

Simple, easy to understand, gets the job done, and not too bland that's a win right there

Grammar and spelling (7/10)

A few spelling and grammar mistakes like when you repeated the same statement in two different paragraphs in chapter five, you should try and edit that

Interaction with readers (5/5)

Was well established

Overall engagement (8/10)

I love this book and its character will continue reading, can't wait for the next update, good Job

Total score (72/100)

⭐⭐⭐⭐

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ebrus999