part 31: the ending

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before you read today's part I just want to ask if you'll check out my new book :

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"That's it?" Louis pronounced as I nodded my head. We were watching a movie and talking about what we had done since we were 'apart'

"Ugh this is such a good part," I exclaimed, sighing at the part where the main character finally admits her love for her love interest.

"I need to watch more movies." He muttered and I laughed.

"We need to get on that," I giggled, laying my head onto his chest and going on my phone. I've already seen this movie countless times before.

Me and Louis had talked about it and we decided that we should keep our relationship a little more private, especially because of paparazzi and what happened last time we kept posting about us. I archived all my posts with louis and he did the same, except for a few posts that portrayed us as friends.

Lily and Louis were no longer on a talking level. I also unfollowed Lily on instagram. I had convinced Louis to talk to Sam, and I practically forced Louis to try being friendly with him. All was good. For now.

Louis' Pov:

It had been a week since we started dating again. I mean we were never officially 'broken up' but it was great to have her in my presence again.

I guess I shouldn't have lied about me dating Lily. And I guess I did love her at some point. But I loved someone else now. And I loved her more than anyone in this world.

And her name was y/n l/n.






(3 years later, they're both attending Oxford University in London, Louis and y/n have both gained fame for being a model, and louis acting in 'The lost Girls' and 'Sex Pistols'. They're still dating. Yes I know this is a REALLY BIG time skip but it gets good :)


y/n's pov:

"Oh my god lou, look at this." I shouted, running to our bedroom that we shared in an apartment. I handed him my phone which displayed a picture from 3 years ago, when we first met.

"So much has changed," He started,

"Don't get emotional." I warned, giving him a kiss and then turning to go to the bathroom.

We were going out on a date night and I decided to wear a gold silky dress. Louis was (obviously) wearing a black suit that fit him perfectly.

"You look so good in suits," I grinned, walking over to him and fixing his tie.

"And you look stunning." He smirked, "So, I'm thinking, dinner and then the movies?" He suggested, combing his hair back so it was slick.

"Sounds great partridge." I smiled, entwining our hands together as we walked out of the apartment and headed to the restaurant.

Louis' Pov:

I was so nervous. What If I messed up? What if the ring slipped from my fingers? What if she said no?

I kept checking my pockets to make sure the ring box was still there.

"Is everything okay?" Y/n asked, giving me one of her smiles and holding my hand stronger. She looked beautiful, with a dress that highlighted all her curves. I mean, when did she not look pretty?

"Yeah," I muttered, still nervous and excited about her reaction.

We got to the restaurant and they led us to the roof, prior to my instructions. Their was a candlelight dinner and the view was just breathtaking.

"Louis, this is crazy." She mumbled, looking out into London. I smiled and sat down, looking at the menu. "How did you manage to do this?" She asked curiously

"I know a few people." I chuckled as she looked at me amazed.

I ordered a steak and she ordered a chicken alfredo pasta. I had already asked the restaurant to bring a fancy red wine so they came out with that too.

"It's beautiful." She said, still astonished and standing up. I watched her closely. This was the moment.

I stood up, walking behind her and taking a big breath.

"Y/n L/n?" I asked, playing out the lines that I had been practicing for the whole month. And to be quite honest, ever since I met her. She turned around slowly, a small smile placed on her lips as I bended and got on one knee. Her eyes widened as she realized what was happening, and I watched as her hand covered her mouth.

"Will you marry me?"



Y/n's Pov:

He got down on one knee, and I felt my face heat up and I put a hand to my mouth, unable to contain what was happening.

"Will you marry me?" He grinned from ear to ear and continued, "I've been waiting for this moment ever since our first kiss, under the mistletoe. I've dreamt of having children with you and growing old together. I want to spend the rest of my life with you."

I couldn't feel anything in my body, I was starstruck. I could hear my hear beating. He opened the ring box in his hand to display a beautiful silver ring, with a big diamond in the middle and small diamonds surrounding it. I couldn't believe he was doing this.

"Will you make me the happiest man alive?"

But how could I ever say no to my best friend?

I quickly nodded and his face lit up. He stood up and wrapped both of his arms around my waist protectively and laughed happily as I could feel the smile on my face getting wider.

I couldn't ever imagine marrying someone other than him.

Louis Partridge.


After y/n and Louis graduated college (2 months after he proposed)
They got married.
The two decided to pay a trip to her hometown, back in america. But it wasn't just the two of them this time.
Y/n was pregnant.
The two of them had 2 children and lived in London, Louis still acting and y/n modeling.



author's note :

Thank you guys so much for reading this story. I can't believe people actually like my writing AH. Thank you for the love and support and I hope this story ended the way you wanted it too.

Check out my new book : I wanna be yours // Louis Partridge

It's a really cute story and If you liked this, you'll like that too :)

I guess this is the end of 'Evermore', and it's crazy how long it's been. I think I started this around a month ago and I finished it pretty fast haha.

Thank you!

And goodbye:)

For now....

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