part 17; the other girl

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authors note: this is kinda a filler chapter but yeah. Also why are so many people reading this 😁 Like it's crazy that I have 630 reads.... that might not be a lot but that's a lot to me thank you <3 enjoy:)

Louis POV:

"It's going to be okay! We'll find him, " I said , looking over to see y/n in the passenger seat. "We'll find him love." I tried to console her . I was driving her to her house.

"I didn't even care!" She cried , "I didn't call or text him to make sure he was okay!"

"It's not your fault." I said,

"I know it isn't," she looked down.

"We'll find him."

We pulled up onto her driveway and instantly ran to the front porch. There were 2 police cars outside.

"Come in." Her mom said , pulling us inside the house . I wrapped my arms around y/n as her parents continued talking to the police.

"We're going to look around. Stay here , the police will be around if you need anything." Her dad came up to us. "And no funny business." He forced a chuckle and then him and y/ns mom went outside.

"Let's make some hot chocolate , okay?" I asked y/n and she nodded. We made hot chocolate and turned on a movie near the fire .
I let her put her head on my lap as I stroked her hair . She looked beautiful , with her wavy h/c hair all over her face , and her features highlighted by the lamp. I watched as her eyes slowly closed and I turned off the lamp. I slowly picked her up and laid down next to her , wrapping my arms around her waist and holding her close to me.

y/n's POV:

I woke up to louis arms wrapped around my waist , and his soft breathing on my neck. It was still dark outside , so I checked my phone for the time. 4:17. Great. I looked back at louis, who was still fast asleep. I smiled and then rearranged my position so I could face his body. I let myself relax from this stressful day. I hope we would find Max. I thought about me and max for a while , before going on my phone and scrolling through stories . I got to Louis' story.

louispartridge_

(repost from @lilychee story)



can't believe this was 2 years ago! Miss the crew💔 love ya

Lily Chee? THE lily chee? What the hell?! I didn't know he was friends with Lily? I had followed her since 2018, and I didn't even notice that she had followed me back 2 weeks ago.

Lily was literally so gorgeous, Im pretty sure I had a fan account for chicken girls a while ago too . Did they date? I mean I knew Louis starred in shows before Enola Holmes, so he probably knew famous people. He still saw her on his feed. What if they were still dating ? No they wouldn't be . I mean look at me and louis right now .

And she was so pretty.

Damn it , I'm overthinking again. They probably were just friends . Friends. That's what I said to myself when I didn't know if I liked Louis. And me and Louis weren't officially dating yet . Ugh . I hate when I do this to myself. I shouldn't be worrying!

I scrolled through Lily's posts and accidentally liked one of her posts from 2 months ago. Shit. Now she would know I was stalking her . I wasn't even stalking her! I closed my phone and looked at Louis, who looked completely innocent. He probably had girlfriends before. I mean obviously, he looked like THAT.

But he's an amazing person. And I Love him.
He wouldn't talk to other girls like that while 'in like' with me. I shook my head at my absurd thinking. He wasn't like that. I heard a beep from my phone and carefully lifted it up to see a dm from Lily Chee.

Oh shit

I opened up our dms and saw :

I opened up our dms and saw :

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wow. I mean that's Lily Chee. I couldn't tell if she was intentionally being like that but I closed my phone and decided to forget it . She was just trying to be nice .

I got up from Louis and went to the kitchen , finding the polices notes and files. Should I look through them? There was one that said 'Max y/l/n' on it so I brought it closer to me . There were two tapes on the front and it looked as if the file was thick .

I opened it and pulled out the first paper I saw .

there was a bunch of his old records , and I didn't want to read them. I didn't need to know what he did. I turned off the light and went back to Lou.

authors note : I have to leave you guys on cliffhangers because that's what makes this story interesting 😭
also do you guys like the dm thing 😎😎😎
reminder to drink water:) I love you all so much and you are worthy. you matter and you are loved .💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

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