Chapter 1

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Yayyy, we're here to the actual rewrite!
The first half of the chapter will be the same, but the next..not so much, so I hope you enjoy these differences!

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Third person POV
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The seven deadly sins... a band of vicious criminal who planned to overthrow the king, and nearly succeeded 10 years ago...

At least that's how it used to go.

Nowadays the sins are seen as the great heroes of Liones.
But no one is getting more praise than their leader.
The dragons sin of wrath:
Elizabeth.

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"Elizabeth?...Elizabeth~?..OI!"

"Huh? Um uh yes?" The silverette, Elizabeth finally snapped out of her 'bubble' as the other sins referred to it. Really, she was just deep in thought.

She looked up to sho had called her to see her fellow sin, and closest friend, Diane, the serpents sin of envy, standing with a worried frown on her face.

"Diane is something wrong?" Elizabeth asked her friend after a few awkward moments of silence.

"I should be asking you that! I mean..you sitting in your own bubble isn't really something new, but you just sit with this..look on your face" Diane said and took a seat next to Elizabeth.
"We've all noticed...you haven't been okay since the fight with Hendrickson have you?"

Elizabeth's eyes averted from her friends and suddenly found the wooden table to be awfully interesting.
"Is that so?" Elizabeth whispered.

It was a rhetorical question but Diane didn't have to know that.
Nobody had to know about the guilt she was feeling inside.

She felt guilty about stopping Hendrickson, after all if she hadn't, Meliodas could've been free again..she could have him back.
...then again she also felt guilty about even considering that.
After all she knew that the demon king and his Commandments wouldn't just let the world get away with sealing them away.

"Maybe I'm just still worked up about the fight" she said, and it was technically part of the truth.

"Hmm...well if you feel like it isn't then come and talk to me. We're friends"

"Best friends" Elizabeth smiled at Diane, who then gave her a big hug...Well, as Big as it could get in her shrunken form.

"Sissy!" Merlin, the boar sin of gluttony, burst through the doors into the bar with a rare look on her face...worry?
"You'll want to see this.." merlin who had incredible enough managed to calm herself significantly in mere seconds, said, and pointed in the direction that mama hawk was currently flying.

Yes. Flying.

Without a second to spare Elizabeth and Diane was out of their seats and joined the rest of the sins out on the flying green pig mostly referred to as 'Mama hawk"

Once out there Elizabeth was left speechless by what she saw in the distance.

"It looks like a mountain" hawk said while shivering in fear. He had no doubt seen just how strong it was with his magic eye.

"A great Albion...." Elizabeth whispered.

"What's an..Albion?" Slader who was currently traveling with the sins asked.

"No time to explain, right now we've gotta stop it from completely leveling Camelot!" Elizabeth said, mostly because She herself didn't have an explanation.
Sure she knew what it was.
But she couldn't find an explanation to why it was moving.

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