My Thoughts 💭

Poem writing??

DISGRACE

I do things hoping you'll be proud of me,
Yet you call me useless.

I try to harder hoping you will commend me,
Yet you fail to appreciate me.

I don't complain even in splitting pain,
Yet you call me ungrateful.

I adorn broken slippers and torn clothes without demanding new ones,
Yet you call me a spoilt brat.

I listen quietly to every curse you spit at me,
Yet when I refute, you call me disrespectful.

I call you mom,
Yet you call me a disgrace.

Lolololol.. okay this was a SICK attempt by ME, the great (🤡), to write a poem and let's be honest here, poem-writing isn't my forte.
Also, please don't hate on my mom..😂😂 she's actually a nice person.. just that she has a very very VERY EXTREMELY short temper. This "poem" was definitely an exaggeration from a teenager point of view.

So I asked my good friend Likifics , who is an AMAZING (and trust me I mean it when I say AMAZING) Poet to help me modify this poem for me. But I hadn't told her it was about my mom.. So she wrote a poem "reconstructing my poem" (her words, not mine) and it turned to be some seriously INTENSEE shiz.😂😂

The poem she wrote was too good for me to not upload it here.. so there you go👇🏼.. do check it out too!

...and she wrote this in what, 5-7minutes??!!
Liki-ji!! Aap toh kuch aur hi cheez ho👏🏼👏🏼