My review II

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This part goes more in depth.

This in no way shape or form described any of the one direction members correctly, they were all complete opposites of their characters and because of that the story was hard to imagine and after awhile I gave up trying to to see Harry Styles as Harry in this story because it simply wasn't possible. 


This story is long winded and sometimes felt as if the plot would never end, after awhile one begins to wonder if the story will ever come to a close because it felt as if it was a continuous cycle of love then fight and repeat.  Furthermore, this story promotes and even accepts cheating and having the excuses for it. What Tessa did really made me angry. She was whiny and annoying and was very hypocritical because she claimed that she had respect but then went and cheated on her boyfriend on numerous occasions and thought that she deserved sympathy and understanding from Liam which was despicable.


Overall, after reading 56 chapters of the first book, I was left wondering what in the world I read, it was a badly plotted story with terrible character portrayal to the point where it was almost a slap to One Direction.

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