Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
I have read the Wattpad version of this book and now the published version. I truly believe that the editing in the published version was rushed maybe to meet certain deadlines??
If you're a first time reader (did not read the Wattpad version), then you will certainly be very confused by a lot of the conversation in this book. Scenes that are in the Wattpad version were eliminated, but referenced in the published book, so you won't know what the characters are talking about or what happened unless you read the Wattpad version.
Also, I feel some very important scenes were cut from the published version that should not have been because they truly represented who the characters are or what they were going through and with scenes either eliminated or rewritten a different way, it really changes my outlook on the whole personifcation of the characters. I just didn't feel like they would have reacted the same way with some of the rewritten versions in the published book. One example is the first big break up, you can understand why it happened in the Wattpad version, but the published version eliminates so much and replaces what happened w/something so minor and trivial, it just makes no sense that a break up occurred at all in my opinion.
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