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After around 10 min Abhi-Pragya, Advik arrived at Luthra house.
(Abhi-Pragya knows about Preeta's relation with Luthra's , of Karan did's also, & they both are quite upset with them specially with Karan, but knowing Rishab personally Abhi had agreed for professional meeting of business)
Rishabh moving to them : Welcome Mr. & Mrs. Mehera, (while bending a bit he caressed Advik's cheeks) welcome Jr. Mehera
Advik(irritatingly): Me junior nahi hu big hu me , meri girlfriend bhi hai ,(looking towards his parents) hai na ?
All family widened their eyes except for Abhi 😂
Abhi: exactly my boy !!
Pragya : (to abhi in low whisper) kya aap bhi ( glares him)
Abhi gets shut up
Pragya : Advik, mene bola hai na aise bado se bat nai krte , sorry bolo unhe
With cute puppy face Advik : Sorry uncle, but hai meri girlfriend
Abhi Laughs and now with him all Luthra's also bursted out laughing
Rakhi : Advik puttar , bohot cute hai tu , pakka teri girlfriend bhi beautiful hogi
Advik : ha ekdum beautiful hai , par meri mumma se jyada nai
Pragya (smiles )
Abhi : ha ye to sahi hai
Rishabh : Aaiye baith te hai
They all settle themselves on sofa
Mahira ( with excitement ) : Abhi sir I am big fan of yours, you are amazing , just wow !!
Abhi : Thank you , and glad you liked my singing
Mahira : Not just your singing I like no no I love you also
Pragya : Like tak hi rakho n ...Fan ho to fan banke raho
Abhi : ( laughs on jealous Pragya and lean towards her ) It's ok she is just fan for me
Mahira : I am sorry just wo me
Pragya : It's ok , majak kr rhi thi me
( So readers Abhi and Pragya not knowing Mahira wala part in Preeran life , they just know the marriage night of Preeta where Karan leaves her on road, and some how Preeta is now in Luthra house, the main reason they don't know )
Mahira : (smiles) Aapka Advik bohot cute aur handsome hai , Hello Advik
Advik : Hello, but aap kon ho , aur aapke bal aise itne chote kyu hai , mujhe aise nai pasand , ajeeb lagta hai na.... long hairs mast lagte hai, meri girlfriend hai na ( he stopped by Pragya )
Pragya (glares him) : Shut up Adi
Kareena : Are thk hai Mrs.Mehera , bachha hai , aur beta ye is ghr ke chote bete se shadi krne wali hai humari family member hai
Abhi-Pragya got shocked listening this and look towards each other
Advik : Ohh,( to Mahira) to aapka bhi boyfriend hai aap usse shadi kr rhi ho
Mahira blushes listening this
Abhigya is not in state because listening of Karan marriage
Rishabh : Nahi wo uski girlfriend ( cutted by Kareena )
Kareena : Ha beta aisa hi hai ( glaring towards Rishabh )
Abhigya notice this
Advik : ( to Pragya) mumma mujhe washroom jana hai
Sameer : If you don't mind me use leke jau ?
Pragya : Thank you
Advik leaves with Sameer
Mahira (to abhi ) : Kya mujhe ...aap mere sath selfie lenge
Rishabh : Mahira wo log yaha kam ke silsile me aye hai
Abhi : It's ok Rishabh , come on
Mahira gets happy
She was clicking selfies with Abhi till then Karan joins them and shocked to see Abhigya here
Abhi & Karan look towards each other
Karan smiles at both of them but Abhi avoided him , Karan notice this and gets sad
Karan( in mind ) : lo abhi ladki ke ghr walo ko bhi patana hai 😶sab Naraz hai mujhse
To cover up awkwardness he move ahead and hug Abhi , Abhi formally hug him, and whisper in his ears
Abhi : Bohot nautanki karte ho , waaahhh ( taunting)
Karan : aisa nai hai aap
Not wanting to talk with Karan Abhi breaks the hug and said : Hello , Mr. karan Luthra, and Congratulations , aapki shadi fix hui hai ,...dusri shadi , am I right ?
Karan got shocked listening this and all family members sense rude ness in Abhi's tone , Karan moves towards Pragya to greet her and going to hug her (he knows her that well) ( pragya just show her hand to stop him ) he felt hurted
Kareena : Aur aapko is shadi me aana hai , bohot badi shadi krwaynge hum humare Karan ki
Pragya and Karan look towards her unbelievably
Abhi : Actually mujhe kuch kam hai to I am busy , let's keep it professional
Kareena : are aise kaise hum Luthra hai hamara collaboration ho rha hai logo ko pata lagna chahiye na
Pragya : Ji hum dekhenge tb ki tb ( kareena see Preeta and Shrishty coming to them )
Kareena (moving towards shrishty, and Preeta said ) : mene tumse kaha tha na niche mat aana...Bohot important guest aane wale hai ( they both have not noticed the guest till now )
Pragya who has noticed Kareena moving out somewhere follows her direction and see her both beloved sisters
Pragya (extra excitement ) : Preetaa, Shrishty and run towards them
Both sisters shocked and surprised to see Pragya here and get happy ...
Preeta running towards her smiling corner to corner having no limit of happiness : Pragya di and both sisters hug each other tightly
Karan smiles seeing his babydoll this happy
Srishty recovering from shock find herself alone out of sisters hug , she run towards them and in complaining tone : Kya Pragya di aap mujhe bhul gyi n aur Preeta di aap bhi aise
Both Pragya and Preeta smiles at her antics
Abhi :Are lambu mai hu na tere liye , (smiling widely) he came and hug Shrishty, She smiles too
Abhi : Hume koi bhav nai deta to thk hai hum apne maje karenge Adi ke sath
Preeta , Shrishty: kya Adi bhi aya hai ?
Preeta : Kaha hai wo , Pragya di kaha hai Adi
Pragya : are wo just ( suddenly Adi came there and saw Preeta and happily run towards her calling her )
Advik :Preetaaaaa
Preeta : ( bending down opened her arms to give him a hug and Adi came and hug her tightly )
Preeta : Aww mera baby kaisa hai tu
Advik : me ekdum handsome hu , mummy bolti hai
Preeta : wo to hai ( and kisses his cheeks )
All family members are shocked to find this closeness between Preeta- Shrishry and Mehera
Mahira (whispering to Kareena ) : Bua ye kya ho rha hai ?
Kareena : mujhe bhi nai samaj aa rha beta
Advik to Preeta : (cupping her face with his small hands ) tum bohot beautiful ho gyi ho kal se bhi jyada and kisses her forhead (Preeta smiles )
Preeta (laughs): I know , me beautiful hu she also kisses his forehead
Advik : nai wrong bola tumne, Bohot beautiful ho ( kisses her both cheeks )
Preeta ( laughing) takes him in her arms and hug him tightly
Abhi : ( teasingly) Ohhhh.... new couple in the town ha (moving towards Preeta)
Abhi : kaisi ho bahu tum ?
Preeta (laughs & hugs him ) : Bohot achhi hu papa ji ( teasingly )
Abhi : Oye oye mujhe ye Papa ji kyu bula rhi ho ...yuksss are tum to meri ghrwali ho ( Karan burnt in super jealousy ) ( Abhi seeing Pragya glaring him ) ghrwali hi hai na wo ....Adhi wali
( Preeta, Srishty, Pragya bursted out laughing )
Abhi : Arora sisters , naughty sisters
Preeta (moving to Pragya ) : Di ( and started to cry ) kaisi hai aap
Pragya : tu bata tu kaisi hai aur ro kyu rhi hai ( Preeta started to cry bitterly by now )
Preeta : nai ...Kuch nai ...Bohot dino bad aapko dekha to ..Bas kuch nai
Pragya sense something wrong with her but choose to not talk
Advik :( tucking at Preeta saree), Preeta tune saree kyu pehni hai ( realising) (sadly) are ha tumhari to shadi ho gyi hai na
Preeta ( going all aww at his cuteness , bend to talk with him) : ha baby , sorry (holding her ears )
Advik : Kaun hai tumhara husband , mujhse bhi jyada handsome hai kya wo, tumhe wo mujh se jyada pasand hai na isliye tumne usse shadi ki aur mera bade hone tk wait nai kiya na ?
Srishty : Oye Advik me hu na tumhare liye ...Me wait krungi , tum bade ho jao fir hum shadi kr lenge ok ( asking teasingly to Abhi) chlega na jiju
Abhi : are daudega bilkul
Advik : nai tum bohot chidati ho mujhe , mujhe Preeta hi pasand hai , tum mere cheeks bhi bohot khich ti ho , mujhe tum nai pasand
Srishty : oye Bandar kya bole tum ha
Advik : dekha papa ye aise krti hai , me kitna handsome hu na , isliye Preeta bhi mujh se pyar krti hai
Preeta (chuckles at his talks ) : ek dum sahi bola mere hero ne
Karan moving towards them bends to talk with Advik
Karan : hey champ , how are you ? and me hu Preeta ka husband
Advik : ( surprisingly ) Karan Luthra ( hugs him )
Karan takes him in warm hug
Suddenly Advik came out of hug
Advik : Sorry wo me excitement me aapko hug kiya ( All looks at him confusingly )
Karan : Kya hua Advik
Preeta : Baby kya hua aise kyu bol rhe ho, tumhe to Karan Luthra bohot pasand hai na , dekho abhi aapke samne hai
Karan smiles at Preeta
Advik : Muje ye pehle pasand the par ab nahi pasand (karan looked at him shocked , because in front of him , someone is accepting the disliking towards him🤣)
Advik : ( to Preeta ) par ab ye hum dono ki love story ke villain hai na , inhone aapse shadi kr li hai na
Karan looked at Preeta being shocked as hell (Preeta laughs seeing his reaction )
Preeta : Tume ye kisne kaha ki villain hai ye
Advik :Wo Papa mujhe story sunate hai n night me unhone bola ki hero aur heroin ke bich agar shadi nai ho to wo villain ki wajah se
Shrishty started to laugh : Wahh jiju
Preeta ( to tease Karan looking towards Karan ) ha Advik , pasand to mujhe bhi nahi hai Karan Luthra but ab kya karu na
Karan ( glaring her ) : Achha , me tumhe pasand nai ata ha
Mahira looked at reaction of Karan and felt insecured
Mahira : Karan Preeta ki choice hi kharab hai you know na ise ye chijo me kya samaj aaye ga , (holding his hand )tum bohot achhe ho aur mujhe pasand bhi ho
Karan try to get out from her hold Karan but got diverted again listening Advik
Advik : ( to Preeta ) to tum Karan Luthra se katti krlo ( happily ) okkk??
Karan widened his eyes and look towards Preeta
Preeta (teasingly to Advik): okay , me Karan se katti kr leti hu ( and Karan just get up from his place , as he was bending 1st 😅)
Mahira : (finding correct time ) Advik, abhi Preeta choti katti karengi , fir me Karan se shadi kr lungi to fir wo Karan se badi wali katti krengi ...Okay
Karan understand the meaning of Mahira words and looked at her unbelievably
Preeta ignoring her (to Pragya Abhi ): Di jiju aap yaha kaise achanak ?
Rishabh : Are Preeta ji mene bola tha n mere Delhi ki party aa rhi hai , wo log yahi hai , par hume pata nai tha aap jante hai inhe
Preeta : Ohk ha
Karan : ( whispering to Preeta ) tumne apna sarla ma ke ghr jane ka decision badal diya hai ye batao unhe abhi nahi to confuse ho jayenge badme
Preeta : are kyu ...Jana hai mujhe (angrily ) tum Mahira ke sath time spend kr lo
Karan looks at her with puppy eyes
Preeta ( to tease him more )
Preeta : Jiju aapka kam ho jaye to bulana mujhe , me Pragya di ko room me leke jati hu meri packing me help kr dengi
Karan looks at her with wide eyes
Pragya : Preeta hum nahi ruk sakte aaj late night hi humari flight hai inka kal concert hai udhar jana hoga hume
Karan ( in excitement shouts )yess yesss, thank you god
All looked towards him with kya hua expression (Preeta understanding his excitement smiles , Karan look towards her and winked at her )
Preeta : Par di aapne to bola tha aap ek week aa rhe ho to fir
Abhi : Sorry yar but achanak aise hua , but tu tension mat le next moth fir aayenge , tere liye ek surprise hai
Preeta : Surprise ? Kya
Abhi : Ufff tum behno ki problem kya hai surprise hai to puch te kyu ho ?
Karan : Ha ekdum sahi bola , ye chauthi fail doctor dumbo hai na , mujh se bhi aise hi puch ti hai jab me ise surprise deta hu (Mahira looked with wide eyes )
Pragya : ( with stern expression) Tum ise surprise nahi shock dete ho
Karan feels sad
Covering all awkwardness Preeta : Di chlo na aap mere sath, ( to Advik ) come on baby
Advik hold her hand and moved with her
Srishty :Di me chlti hu
Preeta : Shrishty ruk ja na sham tk
Rakhi : Ha puttar apni beheno ke sath rehle thoda
Srishty accepts and they went to Preeran room
Rishabh : Mom hum log mere room me hai
Rakhi : oky beta
All family members move to their works except Mahira and Karan
Karan sat there on sofa giving Privacy to sisters
Mahira : ( moving towards Karan ) Karan Chlo na hum dono kahi ghum aate hai tum bhi bore ho rhe ho , thoda quality time spend kr lenge
Karan : Dekho Mahira mujhe koi bore nai ho rha tumhe chahiye to Sherilyn ke sath chli jao, aur ek bat accept kr lo me abhi Preeta ka hu to ye shadi ke sapne dekhna chod do tum , hurt nai hoga tumhe ( and he leaves from there )
Mahira (angrily ) : Karan aise kaise Preeta ko accepts kr skta hai , mujhe kuch bada sochna hoga , aisa jo Preeta ko sabki najro se gira de (smirks )So readers how you find Advik , did you enjoyed his character ?😁
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