Tobias:
I hear footsteps coming up the stairs. I quickly get down on one knee and pull a box with a ring, no not a ring, the ring. I got her it earlyer. I wasn't sure yesterday. But as soon as i woke up this morning, i knew that she was the one. The one i wanted to spent the rest of my life with.
Tris walks through the door. With the roses and notes in her hand and i smile. She notised me and drops the roses and notes and put her hands to her face. Her eyes go wide and i see a tear rolling down her face.
"Beatris Prior, the moment i saw your face at the net, i knew already that i would fall for you. That day you stood up to Eric about the knive throwing, i knew i would never want to hurt you. The day you went into your fear landscape i knew that i want to wake up to your face every morning of my life. The day you found out about Marcus, you treated me like i belong here. With you. Beatris Prior will you take my hand and save my life forever by becoming my amazingly, smart, selfless and brave wife?"
She looks at me for a second and then walks up to me. I start to tear up not hearing and awnser. "You already had me at 'What's your name?'" she says crouching down infrount of me. I laugh stand her up and put the ring on her finger. She starts to cry and i hig her she stops aftee a while and i pull a way from her. I say "Here put thease on." i hand her a pair of leggings.
She quickly puts them on and asks "Why?" i gesture towards the zip line. She lools at me and says "What? Your gonna go ziplining?" she says as she grabs the harnes. "I can now that your here with me" i say climing into mine which is right next to hers. We go down the zipline holding hands and laughing. Half of the time i was just staring at her and thinking that she is mine and i am hers. She fixed me, and now its my turn to fix her. We csn mend each other.
When we get close to the end she pulls her brake and i pull mine. I see Zeke, Uriah, Shauna, and Lynn below us. As soon as we get down i yell "I am never doing that again!" to Uriah and Zeke. I see Lynn and Shauna asking to see the ring. It has the words 'Be Brave' engraved on it. The girls coo at her. Lynn goes to the tower to get the roses and the notes for Tris.
All through out the way back to the apartment, she tells me about what jobs she chose. I'm so happy that now i can truly spend the rest of my with her. "Toby, don't get mad, but Eric likes me." she says putting her head on my shoulder.
"Why would i be mad?" i say she looks up a me and says "Well he asked me about apartments and i said you know which one and he put his own apartment number down so i smaked him round the back of the head and put your number down. I turned round smacked my arse, clicked my fingers an dficked mt hair and said don't mess with what you can't get"
I laugh. "You are a tough cookie. Your my little tough cookie" i say to her making her smile.
~~Time Lapse~~
We stand outside my apartment and i kiss her and she kisses me back. I pull back to unlock the door. I push the door open she walks in and i walk in after her. I lock the door behind me. Tris has already put the flowers in a glass, put the notes away and has taken her shoes off.
I walk up to her and she stands up and whispers "I'm ready" in my ear. I look at her and say "Are you sure?" she nods and kisses me. I start to kiss back. It becomes more hungry and passionte. I kiss each one of crows and she lets out a giggle.
She takes my top off and i slowly creep my hand down the back of her dress, unziping it. it drops to the floor and she laughs. She takes off her leggings. From there i guess you can tell what hapends next.
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For those of you that don't understand. Yes, they do, do it.
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-G