"Hi everyone, my name is Jada and I'll be helping you out today" said Jada to her lovely readers."And my name is Cassie and I'll also be helping you" said Jada's no existent assistant.
I'm begging you guys. When it comes to formal speech unless there's some kinda reason as to why you've structured your speech like this (unlikely) dont do it. You can't have two people speaking in the same paragraph especially when you don't include the parts in bold. It confuses some readers. Sometimes ita not always clear who's speaking, especially when it's a single word or short sentence.
When adding dialogue, new line for the new speaker:
"Hi everyone, my name is Jada and I'll be helping you out today" said Jada to her lovely readers.
"And my name is Cassie and I'll also be helping you" said Jada's no existent assistant.
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Dont make these mistakes!!! [basic writing skills you should know]
Non-FictionOne thing that annoys me is when you find a good wattpad story with a good plot but grammar, structure, spelling etc. I'm no Charles Dickens but there are so many things in stories that you should get right without even thinking. So let me help you...
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