Dont make these mistakes!!! [basic writing skills you should know]

Be nice to your reader part 2 (story time)

One day a Yarichin Bitch Club fanfic came up on my recommendations. (Dont ask why I've never searched for this anike before on wattpad).

It was a lemon (smut, sex or whatever you want to call it).

Now I'm going to kill 2 bird with one stone because this book was an sadly accuarte depiction of how some people thing the devil's tango should go...

The first story I think was with yuri and barley into the second paragraph the characters are already going at it and I'm like...

Where's the build up?
No foreplay
Just straight into it

This isn't okay for reality or fiction 😕.

I was creasing because it was terrible. Not only was it rushed but it was described poorly and I was disappointed so I commented:

"No build up lol"

And this writer was not happy with my comment.

They replied with something along the lines of:

"If you dont like my storythen leave. You're the one who decoed to read a story about child p0rn and r@pe blah blah blah"

And I'm like....what?

I'm failing to understand why you're lack of literacy skills has anything to do with me clicking on the story. I'm not gonna know how chappy the story is unless I read it.

Also I think its more concerning that you wrote a story about cp and 🍇.

Anyways they were pissed. I don't remember their story name or name so hey ho.

Be nice.