"Hot stream of tears"
"His blue orbs"
"Member 😏" - sorry wrongside of wattpadThere's nothing wrong in saying "his georgous blue eyes" or "as the tears ran down my cheek".
You may think you're being creative and original but things like this are used so much in the wattpad community that it becomes as dry or as cringy as someone writing "she said...he said...we said..." repeatedly in a story. You know? Its fine to step back into basic descriptive writing every now and then. Don't over power readers with (wattpad) generic description, it doesn't really show as much creativity as you may think because everyone is doing it.
YOU ARE READING
Dont make these mistakes!!! [basic writing skills you should know]
Non-FictionOne thing that annoys me is when you find a good wattpad story with a good plot but grammar, structure, spelling etc. I'm no Charles Dickens but there are so many things in stories that you should get right without even thinking. So let me help you...