Part 2: Chapter 1; New Enemies

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*So just before we go any further with this s e v e n t h part of my book (I had plans to end it at 10 but now I'm not so sure that's going to be possible) I just wanted to quickly gloss over the different Rage Breathing Forms to make them really easy for not only you to understand but also for me because I've confused myself like a dozen times now already

Also these will be SUPER basic because I can't describe them in super descriptive writing lol

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First form : Ember Slash ; Literally anything involving Sakusa swiping his swords at things

Second form : Skies' Impact ; Mans just curls up like a hedgehog and spins around like a beyblade with his swords cutting everything in the way

Third form : Grand Phoenix ; Slapping hoes with his swords long-distance style

Fourth Form : Hades' Rush ; Sakusa flings his swords like a temperamental baby and yanks the fucker back to him and does some punch or kick or whatever to finish him off

Fifth Form : Blistering Coffin ; THAT ONE MOVE FROM LIKE THE FOURTH CHAPTER WHERE HE JUST TURNS THE DEMON FUCK INTO A PILE OF MEAT WITH HIS CHAINS

Sixth Form : Blitz of the Bloodlusted ; Sakusa rushes forward, chops off a leg, spins around and yanks a head off NEXT

Seventh Form : Phoenix Blaze ; The newest one that's like super strong basically big bro just zooms around the area slicing up his enemy super fast until they turn into slime

Eighth Form : Crushing Swing ; THROWING THE FUCKS AROUND LIKE THEY'RE CAUGHT IN A BLENDER

Ninth Form : Secret :)

Tenth Form : Also secret :))

Eleventh Form : Splitting Rampage ; Little difficult to explain easily but here goes SO Sakusa yeets his swords into the fuckers chest like he loves to do and does some ninja move where he slides between the fucker's legs and then jumps into the air and yanks his swords back into his hands slicing the cunt in half with his chains. Makes sense? Hopefully it does

Twelfth Form : Phoenix Squall ; X-shaped slice lol

Thirteenth Form : LAST SECRET

So yeah that's all the forms and honestly I have no idea why I even made so many when half of them aren't even going to make more than like three appearances

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I have an old draft in between like chapters 3-4 or something like that of part 1 and I'm really considering placing images and things like that of the inspirations for the appearances of my OCs (i.e, Sephir, Irire, Sakusa, etc.) just to make it easy for people to imagine them for the sake of this story

If you think I should do something like that then don't hesitate to tell me what you think but I won't force you to obviously I'll come to a decision either way but anyways I'm done ranting enjoy this chapter ok BYE*


"ARE YOU KIDDING ME, YOU GODDAMN PIECE OF SHIT?! YOU WANT ME TO GO BACK ON HIS WORDS?! YOU'RE UTTERLY BRAINDEAD IF YOU BELIEVE I'D DO SUCH AN IDIOTIC THING!!"

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