4 o'clock category winners

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Winners of the 4 o'clock category is announced below.
Congratulations to them.

The first place is secured by the book #Save me Army written by marie0211 and judged by Yang_semi.

Book name: #Save me army Book title: 03/05Book cover: 03/05Description:09/10Prolougue: 08/10Plot: 18/20Chapter and flow: 15/15Emotions:08/10Grammar and vocabulary: 14/15Creations:04/05Dialogue: 04/05Overall: 03/05Totall= 89/100Review: Okay I like ...

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Book name: #Save me army
Book title: 03/05
Book cover: 03/05
Description:09/10
Prolougue: 08/10
Plot: 18/20
Chapter and flow: 15/15
Emotions:08/10
Grammar and vocabulary: 14/15
Creations:04/05
Dialogue: 04/05
Overall: 03/05
Totall= 89/100
Review: Okay I like your book its awesome. The title its says the hastag what got trending. But the story isnt about it. It says like v is telling the army to save him. So its not that much matching but okay. Cover, its cute. But the story cover is not that much eye catching its kinda plain. Description, its great i would say its a great description it had included all the information its awesome. Prolougue, its also good. You have given all the character descriptions at first so its easy for readers to understand. Emotions, I think its not that a emotions filled story so its not that bad. Grammar and vocabulary is great I didnt found any mistake in grammar. its all well written. Creations, well i have to say this story needed some more plot twists. dialogue, its good well written. Overall, ill say this story is so familiar i mean every army fan fic is like starting with a concert and like that. So its kinds boring but not marrying v is the thing it changes from others. Every ff the member is gonna marry the girl or live happy life with him. In here its different so I like it.

The second place is secured by the book named Imposterism written by Auralite and judged by Author_Jenny.

Book :: ImposterismBOOK TITLE [4/5]BOOK COVER [3/5]DESCRIPTION [8/10] PROLOGUE (FIRST CHAPTER) [4/5]PLOT [17/20]CHAPTERS & FLOW [14/15] EMOTIONS [8/10] GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY [14/15]CREATIONS [3/5]DIALOGUE [5/5] OVERALL [4/5] TOTAL= 84/100 REVIEW - ...

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Book :: Imposterism
BOOK TITLE [4/5]
BOOK COVER [3/5]
DESCRIPTION [8/10]
PROLOGUE (FIRST CHAPTER) [4/5]
PLOT [17/20]
CHAPTERS & FLOW [14/15]
EMOTIONS [8/10]
GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY [14/15]
CREATIONS [3/5]
DIALOGUE [5/5]
OVERALL [4/5]
TOTAL= 84/100
REVIEW - A very underrated book, it deserves so much more views. I absolutely love the literary skills that is being knitted to every line of the story. The work is clean and clearly reflects the author's efforts, the descriptive writing and supported the writing style inorder to make it look more enduring. There were a few grammatical mistakes here and there that could be corrected through proofreading but apart from that the book is surely recommendable.

The third place is secured by the book named About our love written by Taehyungs-soul-mate and judged by Author_Jenny.

Book :: About our love BOOK TITLE [4/5]BOOK COVER [3/5]DESCRIPTION [10/10] PROLOGUE (FIRST CHAPTER) [4/5] PLOT [19/20] CHAPTERS & FLOW [15/15] EMOTIONS [10/10] It is just perfect

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Book :: About our love
BOOK TITLE [4/5]
BOOK COVER [3/5]
DESCRIPTION [10/10]
PROLOGUE (FIRST CHAPTER) [4/5]
PLOT [19/20]
CHAPTERS & FLOW [15/15]
EMOTIONS [10/10] It is just perfect.
GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY [5/15]
CREATIONS [5/5]
DIALOGUE [4/5]
TOTAL= 78/100
REVIEW- The cover is pretty, the colour combinations she chose is awesome. The font she cose is awesome. It will attract readers. But the thing is it doesn't go well with the story. Black is for dark stories and i guess it is not a dark one. The flow is perfect. Things are nicely explained. It doesn't confuse you. I am really amazed how nicely the writer has explained the emotions. Needs to work on grammar a lot, vocab is good, but still she needs to work on it and the marks carried by grammar is 0. There are many grammar mistakes. There are also punctuation mark mistakes. Needs to be worked one.. There are many grammar and punctuation mistakes needs to be worked on, there are spelling errrors. Like 'Thoes' instead of 'those' . And many more needs to be worked on, maybe she can change the colour scheme of the cover.

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