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Fated to love you written by Remi473 judged by Yang_semi

Title: Fated to love you Title: 03 Cover: 02 Description: 06 Prolougue: 03 Plot: 13 Chapters and flow: 12 Emotions: 06 Grammar and vocabulary: 12 Creations: 03 Overall: 03 Total= 75 Review: Well the title is a very common name like fated to love. But its okay not that bad. Cover is plain the title in the cover is too low its soo unrecognizable. It needed a good cover. Description is like you wrote something thats not in a chapter just to say them without writing in chapters but its not the purpose of write a description it needs some information That IS written in the book and to catch readers. To increase thier curiosity. Prolougue is not that bad but need to improve. Plot is too common. I mean most stories has like this dreaming them and loving in future. And it had 0 plot twits. Its a cute story. But need to improve. Grammar it had few mistakes there. Emotions is not expressed enough in this story.

My furious wife by Remi473 judged  by Yang_semi.

Title: My furious wife Title - 3 Cover - 3 Description - 2 Prologue - 4 Plot - 14 Chapter and flow - 9 Emotions- 3 Grammar and vocabulary - 6 Cretaion- 4 Dialogue - 3 Overall - 3 Total - 55 Review - The title is fine but not creative as such and the cover is too bland, the colour of the font and the base don't go well. The description is too short and gives no proper idea of the story. The prologue was well thought but the writer has not been able to explain the scenes well. The plot is fine though I would say it nothing unique in it, but it is still well thought and is no got going haywire so it's appreciable. Too many grammar and punctuations error that are clearly visible. In many places you and I ( narrator while adressing self ) have been used for the same person's pov. The dialogues are also very short and to the point, but this is a story. Overall I would say the story is not impressive and it needs heavy editing and corrections. The writer has to keep the story in one tense not keep switching between past and present tense.

Sincerely mine by lobelybub judged by Yang_semi.
name: sincerely mine Book title: 04 Book cover: 02 Description: 04 Prologue:03 Plot: 17 Chapter and flow: 08 Emotions: 07 Grammar and vocabulary: 13 Creations: 03 Dialogue:03 Overall: 04 Total: 68 Reviews: The cover is too plain it does not attract much readers. The title is not that eye catching. Description is well written but it can improve. Prologue is okay not bad. Plot is too common I don't know if it's gonna have more plot twists in further because is still ongoing but most stories it's gonna be a mafia then finding the girl. Emotions written finely. Grammar and vocabulary had not soo much problems but had few mistakes. Dialogue is written well. Overall I would say a good story but I would like more plot twists.

Meant to be by YoonminSlaysus judged by Author_Jenny.

Book :: Meant to be Book title:4/5 Book cover:3/5 Description:7/10 Prologue:4/5 Plot:18/20 Chapters and flow:13/15 Emotions:8/10 Grammar and vocabulary:13/15 Creations:4/5 Dialogue:3/5 Overall:3/5 Total:77/100 Review This story is an interesting and emotional one with an amazing title and a good cover. The author was successful in formulating the character's so real which makes us feel them. The prologue is beautifully described giving a slight twist that makes us curious and the storytelling method of the author is extraordinary. Overall the book is A category one. But I recommend the author to work with the story's blurb to make it quite catchy and well described one.